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07-28-2013, 10:43 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: San Andreas, CA
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An Old Verse
Thought I'd post this shit up...
Spooky's a mortician, The flow's embalmin fluid preservin matter But didn't I cremate you ... you've returned from the dirt I've scattered To earn an L, burn in hell ... Fuck it, I'll murder Casper What's worse than death, You dyin twice is the perfect answer Get another nail in the coffin, My words the hammer No gun lyrics, no gat bustin, I just burst in laughter As soon as I signed up you niggas were my first cadaver Painful memories, guess it's true when they assert the past hurts Even more torture, Is why a bitch would birth you bastards We've seen a lot of shit, but your life has been the worst disaster So die in a worse way, like get raped and never heard of after Me, I die hard ... I'm the most hated but I emerge un-tattered Since my style's original, how the fuck y'all got a certain swagger? All you niggas the same ... just a punch line gat verse battler Pssshh, you a Classick Innovation?! You need a drastic renovation I do repairs ... You wanna box nigga, Your casket is waitin No gloves, no holds barred, I bash in all faces I feel at home battlin, And you're trapped in the basement I got it locked ... There's no way that your ass is escapin |
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07-28-2013, 10:47 PM
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The Landlord
Join Date: Jan 2013
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lmao i thought it was dope
So die in a worse way, like get raped and never heard of after Me, I die hard ... I'm the most hated but I emerge un-tattered Since my style's original, how the fuck y'all got a certain swagger? All you niggas the same ... just a punch line gat verse battler niceeee |
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07-28-2013, 11:25 PM
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Sergeant Slaughter
Join Date: Mar 1986
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Not bad spook. Not amazing but not bad.
Your still an ass tickling faggot tho |
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07-28-2013, 11:59 PM
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Lol this was the epitome of what I'd expect from spooky I liked the gun busting wordplay n the box casket line lol found em amusing... Pretty dope, I can't hate
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07-29-2013, 02:39 AM
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I love this i had to read it twice those last two line were perfect i was like damn lol good and creative
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07-29-2013, 12:05 PM
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You should write while locked in a basement. I like consistency
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07-29-2013, 08:19 PM
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this was nice fam.. not DOPE DOPE but most def. above average shit homie... nice flow and swag up in it and the box line was fire son..... nice shit @SpookyDeep havent seen you drop in a while
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07-29-2013, 10:28 PM
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Join Date: May 2013
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Damn spook this shit is toooo fire.... Def feelin the flow, structure is perfect ... Loving this shit meng, def keep dropping... Btw my fav part was prob the first like 8 lines, wooooooo rediculous
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07-29-2013, 10:30 PM
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Btw these Kats is crazy if they don't think this is well above average lol... Then again theirs so many dope dudes on this site dropping the craziest shit so I can see why maybe to them it's not as good as I believe it to be... None the less shots dope as fuck
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07-30-2013, 11:41 AM
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I'm express..... flow sound good Lyrics sound sickness... you should let us hear some audios.
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11-14-2014, 09:57 AM
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BITER
Join Date: Jan 2013
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11-14-2014, 09:38 PM
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DOHpe since 02'
Join Date: Aug 2004
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i liked this
props
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11-14-2014, 09:38 PM
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DOHpe since 02'
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Surrounded by white ppl
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Battle Record: 43-24
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i liked this
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11-15-2014, 10:41 AM
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White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
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Flow was crisp as shit tbh. Very smooth read. Not a huge fan of the content but a few lines had some potential. Thanks for posting.. dont hold back
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