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SpookyDeep 07-28-2013 10:43 PM

An Old Verse
 
Thought I'd post this shit up...

Spooky's a mortician, The flow's embalmin fluid preservin matter
But didn't I cremate you ... you've returned from the dirt I've scattered
To earn an L, burn in hell ... Fuck it, I'll murder Casper
What's worse than death, You dyin twice is the perfect answer
Get another nail in the coffin, My words the hammer
No gun lyrics, no gat bustin, I just burst in laughter
As soon as I signed up you niggas were my first cadaver
Painful memories, guess it's true when they assert the past hurts
Even more torture, Is why a bitch would birth you bastards
We've seen a lot of shit, but your life has been the worst disaster
So die in a worse way, like get raped and never heard of after
Me, I die hard ... I'm the most hated but I emerge un-tattered
Since my style's original, how the fuck y'all got a certain swagger?
All you niggas the same ... just a punch line gat verse battler
Pssshh, you a Classick Innovation?! You need a drastic renovation
I do repairs ... You wanna box nigga, Your casket is waitin
No gloves, no holds barred, I bash in all faces
I feel at home battlin, And you're trapped in the basement
I got it locked ... There's no way that your ass is escapin

God Of War 07-28-2013 10:47 PM

lmao i thought it was dope


So die in a worse way, like get raped and never heard of after
Me, I die hard ... I'm the most hated but I emerge un-tattered
Since my style's original, how the fuck y'all got a certain swagger?
All you niggas the same ... just a punch line gat verse battler


niceeee

SiK 07-28-2013 11:25 PM

Not bad spook. Not amazing but not bad.

Your still an ass tickling faggot tho

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 11:59 PM

Lol this was the epitome of what I'd expect from spooky I liked the gun busting wordplay n the box casket line lol found em amusing... Pretty dope, I can't hate

Kiki 07-29-2013 02:39 AM

I love this i had to read it twice those last two line were perfect i was like damn lol good and creative

Zombie 07-29-2013 12:05 PM

You should write while locked in a basement. I like consistency

Spoken 07-29-2013 08:19 PM

this was nice fam.. not DOPE DOPE but most def. above average shit homie... nice flow and swag up in it and the box line was fire son..... nice shit @SpookyDeep havent seen you drop in a while

Sho Money EMG 07-29-2013 10:28 PM

Damn spook this shit is toooo fire.... Def feelin the flow, structure is perfect ... Loving this shit meng, def keep dropping... Btw my fav part was prob the first like 8 lines, wooooooo rediculous

Sho Money EMG 07-29-2013 10:30 PM

Btw these Kats is crazy if they don't think this is well above average lol... Then again theirs so many dope dudes on this site dropping the craziest shit so I can see why maybe to them it's not as good as I believe it to be... None the less shots dope as fuck

Dope girl 07-30-2013 11:41 AM

I'm express..... flow sound good Lyrics sound sickness... you should let us hear some audios.



SpookyDeep 11-14-2014 09:57 AM

Up

El Muffin 11-14-2014 09:38 PM

i liked this

props

El Muffin 11-14-2014 09:38 PM

i liked this

props

Geno 11-15-2014 10:41 AM

Flow was crisp as shit tbh. Very smooth read. Not a huge fan of the content but a few lines had some potential. Thanks for posting.. dont hold back


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