happy fucking fathers day

Geno · 06-16-2013, 03:44 PM

Inside still aint rite, something keeps fuckin with gen
That's why the beautiful truth's about to get ugly again
The sun is in set mode and im restless as hell, rest didn't help
And I dont plan on telling anyone, unless its myself
Recording sessions of my privacy to witness my life, christ
And I keep talking to my roommates that I didn't invite
There invisible like, transparent or fucking gone with the wind
Crossing the bridge, like next time I'm driving rite off of this bitch!
horrible shit, fathers day, I just got back from my kids and Im home
Talking to her like I'm nuts, cause she don't even live with me though!
This fucking shit is a joke, and I ain't no where near laughin it off
Tryin to gain her mothers friendship when her stupid ass is a loss!
I'm just trapped in the thoughts, that maybe it'll change for the better
Daughter asked me and her mom to get along in her fathers day letter
She's gotten incredibly wise and she's totally young..
Learning more shit from her parents then we notice she does
A rollercoaster of emotions becomes the theme park of my life
Going from sad to pissed off makes me too exhausted to write
The caffiene I drank had me lost in the hype, but the feeling is gone
Hurting inside, convincing myself I'm fucking healing is all
Will someone turn the fucking helium off, or is a frog in my throat?
Or am I just about to collapse, or am I sort of already broke
Fuck these stupid ass questions man, you already know
Just grab the keys, well hit that bridge where we started to go
Fuck it

06-16-2013, 04:07 PM

pretty dope...felt the emotion.
flow was effortless, i think i MAYBE caught 1 hiccup...
literary device was i like ur word correlation helium/frog in throat that type of sht
but this was more a vent i feel, bc what i take away is more emotion than anything else...
glad u got it off ur chest...
keep writing.

oats · 06-16-2013, 04:41 PM

Another example or why you're one of the writers I make a point to read. You always strike a balance between deep emotional content and accessible articulation of it, which is hard to do. Almost Guru-esque? Your shit resonates with a lot of people because of it, and that's no easy feat. Keep posting.

Eŋg · 06-23-2013, 12:11 AM

I thought this was dope.

Geno · 05-16-2014, 02:36 PM

yessssssssssss. fuck bitches

06-16-2013, 03:44 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	happy fucking fathers day Inside still aint rite, something keeps fuckin with gen That's why the beautiful truth's about to get ugly again The sun is in set mode and im restless as hell, rest didn't help And I dont plan on telling anyone, unless its myself Recording sessions of my privacy to witness my life, christ And I keep talking to my roommates that I didn't invite There invisible like, transparent or fucking gone with the wind Crossing the bridge, like next time I'm driving rite off of this bitch! horrible shit, fathers day, I just got back from my kids and Im home Talking to her like I'm nuts, cause she don't even live with me though! This fucking shit is a joke, and I ain't no where near laughin it off Tryin to gain her mothers friendship when her stupid ass is a loss! I'm just trapped in the thoughts, that maybe it'll change for the better Daughter asked me and her mom to get along in her fathers day letter She's gotten incredibly wise and she's totally young.. Learning more shit from her parents then we notice she does A rollercoaster of emotions becomes the theme park of my life Going from sad to pissed off makes me too exhausted to write The caffiene I drank had me lost in the hype, but the feeling is gone Hurting inside, convincing myself I'm fucking healing is all Will someone turn the fucking helium off, or is a frog in my throat? Or am I just about to collapse, or am I sort of already broke Fuck these stupid ass questions man, you already know Just grab the keys, well hit that bridge where we started to go Fuck it __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 06-16-2013 at 04:14 PM.

05-16-2014, 02:36 PM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	yessssssssssss. fuck bitches __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-16-2013, 04:07 PM	#2
Rawn M.D. Guest Posts: n/a	pretty dope...felt the emotion. flow was effortless, i think i MAYBE caught 1 hiccup... literary device was i like ur word correlation helium/frog in throat that type of sht but this was more a vent i feel, bc what i take away is more emotion than anything else... glad u got it off ur chest... keep writing.

06-16-2013, 04:41 PM	#3
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,075 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005425	Another example or why you're one of the writers I make a point to read. You always strike a balance between deep emotional content and accessible articulation of it, which is hard to do. Almost Guru-esque? Your shit resonates with a lot of people because of it, and that's no easy feat. Keep posting.

06-23-2013, 12:11 AM	#4
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,146 Rep Power: 0	I thought this was dope.