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10-02-2014, 12:40 AM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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Letterman vs. Touche Guerrero [Letterman Wins]
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10-02-2014, 03:18 AM
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Here... No rebuttal
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10-02-2014, 09:48 AM
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Cool
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10-02-2014, 09:03 PM
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T.Guerrero
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then feminine bars ain't hard..my raps'll put a flat to ya vitals
try with yur might all you want..you still flow like a bitch on her cycle |
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10-06-2014, 07:11 PM
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Your concepts are sick but the format wrecks it
Because if wording counts, yours is obviously dyslexic Last edited by Letterman; 10-06-2014 at 07:15 PM. |
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10-06-2014, 08:55 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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I have Letterman taking this on the strength of his compactness and quick jab. Touche had a bar that was more polished in concept, but pms bars have been used, especially in that manner, way too many times before. A dyslexic bar I can give a pass on, I know Certain used a dyslexic concept but his bar wasn't centered around it. Either way Letterman's was less redundant and delivered rather smoothly.
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10-06-2014, 10:14 PM
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Iono. Not really feeling either entry this wk.
Most notably touche's..the line was qui te dated. I thought damb near every line u had for Windu was better than thid Lettermans was kinda eh too..but his was more effective imo V/ Letterman
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10-06-2014, 10:19 PM
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Old concept missing the witty approach vs meh concept with smooth wording.
Letterman had the better jab.
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10-07-2014, 09:33 AM
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Vote- Touche, just had a little more effectiveness to it
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10-07-2014, 09:38 PM
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Both were pretty bad... I guess I'll go Letterman for not using a period punch in a more clever way I guess
V/ Letterman
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10-07-2014, 10:35 PM
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hated lettermans basic dyslexic punch. couldve been
better if it had some witty sting to it. didnt really like touche either cuz of the played, period play but it was more aggressive and aimed at "hurting" his opponent. vote: touche
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10-07-2014, 11:25 PM
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Touche Guerrero: This was a terrible twist on a 30-year-old punch line.
Letterman: This would have worked if you had somehow incorporated counting. But you didn't. This was weak, but at least it was an attempt. Vote: Letterman
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10-08-2014, 03:40 AM
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Both we're played
But letterman didn't use a period punch so he wins Vote letterman |
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