Heart attack rhythm

Wise Wiggles · 05-25-2014, 05:50 PM

Therapy required ?
I'm not someone you'd want to terribly admire
This eerie thing's on fire. Why care?
I'm honest. This fucking nightmare is constant
Be polite. Share the knowledge. It's bare
This carnival we thrive in. I'm aware my life's spent
Where's your motive when time's nothing?
Daily grind. Either you gutter or fortune five hundred
Normal life puzzles. It's all a game. Pour the slime buckets
But it'll never happen. You see, I'm fine with that
Y'all write your hearts out. I'm keeping mine intact
Just design the trash. You & your castle of garbage
I'm high off your flesh. Yes, the capsule is cartilage
Past goals are tarnished, but I'm..
Used to it, not alarmed. The rotten syringe of spite
The gloomiest crossing guard gots some business tonight
I'm Layhee on the bottle. Soul has been dead
A bowl of CNX makes shit clear like its full of windex
Guess I'm just so.... undeserving.
It's No wonder hurt seems fun at first
Drink from it, & it takes from you
The pain none knew. This space. Come through. The vein runs blue.
Brain's the same, laser sponge stew
Jesus Christ, I don't care. I'm just kidding, it's so rare, the epiphanies
Olive in this symphony. Who the fuck are you? You're full of for sure a mystery. Scissor me and dissect. I'm wrecked. That kid ain't died yet? Fly mess. Why step when you don't have to? You're my own tattoo. Smoke me out. I won't match you
Why your stars connect? Hidden. Just skip him. Bed ridden. Heads missing. Welcome to the heart attack rhythm... Fuck your pity

Eŋg · 05-25-2014, 07:25 PM

oats · 05-25-2014, 08:41 PM

Where's your motive when time's nothing?
Daily grind. Either you gutter or fortune five hundred
Normal life puzzles. It's all a game. Pour the slime buckets

Really dug this. Nothing weak in this verse, dope from start to finish

DexLabb · 05-25-2014, 08:50 PM

lol that jim lahey gif. fuck that just won the thread. btw, liked the fortune 500 line

dull boy · 05-25-2014, 10:58 PM

Your writing is becoming more like mine in it's honesty and seeming pointlessness. It's like you only do it because it's what you do, and what's produced is just a transcript of the hollowness you appear to be wading through. Fuck honesty. Give them what they want. Be who you need them to think you are. Lie, and don't feel regret about it. The world's a beautiful piece of shit and you don't owe it honesty, at least not the majority of these worthless fucks.

Wise Wiggles · 05-26-2014, 04:02 AM

Idk

Geno · 05-26-2014, 12:07 PM

what happened to that insanely long piece you had here lol

Wise Wiggles · 05-26-2014, 12:28 PM

That was an accident. Deleted it.

Zen · 05-26-2014, 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dull boy

Your writing is becoming more like mine in it's honesty and seeming pointlessness. It's like you only do it because it's what you do, and what's produced is just a transcript of the hollowness you appear to be wading through. Fuck honesty. Give them what they want. Be who you need them to think you are. Lie, and don't feel regret about it. The world's a beautiful piece of shit and you don't owe it honesty, at least not the majority of these worthless fucks.

Name names.

But yeah this was cool, Wise.

05-25-2014, 05:50 PM	#1
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Heart attack rhythm Therapy required ? I'm not someone you'd want to terribly admire This eerie thing's on fire. Why care? I'm honest. This fucking nightmare is constant Be polite. Share the knowledge. It's bare This carnival we thrive in. I'm aware my life's spent Where's your motive when time's nothing? Daily grind. Either you gutter or fortune five hundred Normal life puzzles. It's all a game. Pour the slime buckets But it'll never happen. You see, I'm fine with that Y'all write your hearts out. I'm keeping mine intact Just design the trash. You & your castle of garbage I'm high off your flesh. Yes, the capsule is cartilage Past goals are tarnished, but I'm.. Used to it, not alarmed. The rotten syringe of spite The gloomiest crossing guard gots some business tonight I'm Layhee on the bottle. Soul has been dead A bowl of CNX makes shit clear like its full of windex Guess I'm just so.... undeserving. It's No wonder hurt seems fun at first Drink from it, & it takes from you The pain none knew. This space. Come through. The vein runs blue. Brain's the same, laser sponge stew Jesus Christ, I don't care. I'm just kidding, it's so rare, the epiphanies Olive in this symphony. Who the fuck are you? You're full of for sure a mystery. Scissor me and dissect. I'm wrecked. That kid ain't died yet? Fly mess. Why step when you don't have to? You're my own tattoo. Smoke me out. I won't match you Why your stars connect? Hidden. Just skip him. Bed ridden. Heads missing. Welcome to the heart attack rhythm... Fuck your pity __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 05-25-2014 at 06:00 PM.

05-25-2014, 08:41 PM	#3
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	Where's your motive when time's nothing? Daily grind. Either you gutter or fortune five hundred Normal life puzzles. It's all a game. Pour the slime buckets Really dug this. Nothing weak in this verse, dope from start to finish __________________ You should be water

05-25-2014, 08:50 PM	#4
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	lol that jim lahey gif. fuck that just won the thread. btw, liked the fortune 500 line __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-26-2014, 04:02 AM	#6
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Idk __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 05-26-2014 at 04:12 AM. Reason: What's going on

05-26-2014, 12:07 PM	#7
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	what happened to that insanely long piece you had here lol __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-25-2014, 07:25 PM	#2
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0

05-25-2014, 10:58 PM	#5
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Your writing is becoming more like mine in it's honesty and seeming pointlessness. It's like you only do it because it's what you do, and what's produced is just a transcript of the hollowness you appear to be wading through. Fuck honesty. Give them what they want. Be who you need them to think you are. Lie, and don't feel regret about it. The world's a beautiful piece of shit and you don't owe it honesty, at least not the majority of these worthless fucks.

05-26-2014, 12:28 PM	#8
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	That was an accident. Deleted it. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

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