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Wise Wiggles 05-25-2014 05:50 PM

Heart attack rhythm
 
Therapy required ?
I'm not someone you'd want to terribly admire
This eerie thing's on fire. Why care?
I'm honest. This fucking nightmare is constant
Be polite. Share the knowledge. It's bare
This carnival we thrive in. I'm aware my life's spent
Where's your motive when time's nothing?
Daily grind. Either you gutter or fortune five hundred
Normal life puzzles. It's all a game. Pour the slime buckets
But it'll never happen. You see, I'm fine with that
Y'all write your hearts out. I'm keeping mine intact
Just design the trash. You & your castle of garbage
I'm high off your flesh. Yes, the capsule is cartilage
Past goals are tarnished, but I'm..
Used to it, not alarmed. The rotten syringe of spite
The gloomiest crossing guard gots some business tonight
I'm Layhee on the bottle. Soul has been dead
A bowl of CNX makes shit clear like its full of windex
Guess I'm just so.... undeserving.
It's No wonder hurt seems fun at first
Drink from it, & it takes from you
The pain none knew. This space. Come through. The vein runs blue.
Brain's the same, laser sponge stew
Jesus Christ, I don't care. I'm just kidding, it's so rare, the epiphanies
Olive in this symphony. Who the fuck are you? You're full of for sure a mystery. Scissor me and dissect. I'm wrecked. That kid ain't died yet? Fly mess. Why step when you don't have to? You're my own tattoo. Smoke me out. I won't match you
Why your stars connect? Hidden. Just skip him. Bed ridden. Heads missing. Welcome to the heart attack rhythm... Fuck your pity

Eŋg 05-25-2014 07:25 PM

http://i.imgur.com/g99gB1U.gif

oats 05-25-2014 08:41 PM

Where's your motive when time's nothing?
Daily grind. Either you gutter or fortune five hundred
Normal life puzzles. It's all a game. Pour the slime buckets

Really dug this. Nothing weak in this verse, dope from start to finish

DexLabb 05-25-2014 08:50 PM

lol that jim lahey gif. fuck that just won the thread. btw, liked the fortune 500 line

dull boy 05-25-2014 10:58 PM

Your writing is becoming more like mine in it's honesty and seeming pointlessness. It's like you only do it because it's what you do, and what's produced is just a transcript of the hollowness you appear to be wading through. Fuck honesty. Give them what they want. Be who you need them to think you are. Lie, and don't feel regret about it. The world's a beautiful piece of shit and you don't owe it honesty, at least not the majority of these worthless fucks.

Wise Wiggles 05-26-2014 04:02 AM

Idk

Geno 05-26-2014 12:07 PM

what happened to that insanely long piece you had here lol

Wise Wiggles 05-26-2014 12:28 PM

That was an accident. Deleted it.

Zen 05-26-2014 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 340347)
Your writing is becoming more like mine in it's honesty and seeming pointlessness. It's like you only do it because it's what you do, and what's produced is just a transcript of the hollowness you appear to be wading through. Fuck honesty. Give them what they want. Be who you need them to think you are. Lie, and don't feel regret about it. The world's a beautiful piece of shit and you don't owe it honesty, at least not the majority of these worthless fucks.

Name names.

But yeah this was cool, Wise.


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