Quick drop

Zen · 05-01-2013, 01:06 PM

I'm alone. A recluse. In my own home I'm viewed
Like I've all ready sewn a noose around my neck.
I'm bound to regret because I'm prone to abuse
From ho's that's loose...Well fuck it, I suppose that's rude
Because you know the truth I've only chose my Muse.
See after part eight on this path of heart break I'll compose my views
Into notes, a tune that shows that you have flown the coop
And are nothing but a fuckin slut. Then the world will loathe you too.
So how's this new bastard you're with? Are you happy? In bliss?
Because if I had to guess I bet his families proud he got my hand me downs,
Can you stand me now that I've crossed the line and lost my mind and it can't be found!?
I DO!! Now I'm a man thats out workin on every dirty blonde
That amounts to a night of fuckin, Whores tied up in
Cuffs, And when I bust it's an eye of nut and guess what?
The best sluts are a dime a dozen then it's goodbye and....Nothin...

Just Write · 05-01-2013, 01:19 PM

lol i chuckled at a few parts, hand me down line was gold. keep it up zen

YDK · 05-01-2013, 07:56 PM

this was dope bro lol the flow an rhyme fucked wit me but it was nice. just a lil more complex than i was expecting lol nice lil vent tho man you got some nice multies an flow. i wanna read some more thought out shit from you

Dope girl · 05-03-2013, 11:07 PM

you are dope, Nice Flows & Multis.

05-01-2013, 01:06 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Quick drop I'm alone. A recluse. In my own home I'm viewed Like I've all ready sewn a noose around my neck. I'm bound to regret because I'm prone to abuse From ho's that's loose...Well fuck it, I suppose that's rude Because you know the truth I've only chose my Muse. See after part eight on this path of heart break I'll compose my views Into notes, a tune that shows that you have flown the coop And are nothing but a fuckin slut. Then the world will loathe you too. So how's this new bastard you're with? Are you happy? In bliss? Because if I had to guess I bet his families proud he got my hand me downs, Can you stand me now that I've crossed the line and lost my mind and it can't be found!? I DO!! Now I'm a man thats out workin on every dirty blonde That amounts to a night of fuckin, Whores tied up in Cuffs, And when I bust it's an eye of nut and guess what? The best sluts are a dime a dozen then it's goodbye and....Nothin... Last edited by Zen; 05-03-2013 at 12:27 PM.

05-01-2013, 01:19 PM	#2
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	lol i chuckled at a few parts, hand me down line was gold. keep it up zen __________________

05-01-2013, 07:56 PM	#3
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	this was dope bro lol the flow an rhyme fucked wit me but it was nice. just a lil more complex than i was expecting lol nice lil vent tho man you got some nice multies an flow. i wanna read some more thought out shit from you __________________

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05-03-2013, 11:07 PM	#4
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	you are dope, Nice Flows & Multis.