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Zen 05-01-2013 01:06 PM

Quick drop
 
I'm alone. A recluse. In my own home I'm viewed
Like I've all ready sewn a noose around my neck.
I'm bound to regret because I'm prone to abuse
From ho's that's loose...Well fuck it, I suppose that's rude
Because you know the truth I've only chose my Muse.
See after part eight on this path of heart break I'll compose my views
Into notes, a tune that shows that you have flown the coop
And are nothing but a fuckin slut. Then the world will loathe you too.
So how's this new bastard you're with? Are you happy? In bliss?
Because if I had to guess I bet his families proud he got my hand me downs,
Can you stand me now that I've crossed the line and lost my mind and it can't be found!?
I DO!! Now I'm a man thats out workin on every dirty blonde
That amounts to a night of fuckin, Whores tied up in
Cuffs, And when I bust it's an eye of nut and guess what?
The best sluts are a dime a dozen then it's goodbye and....Nothin...

Just Write 05-01-2013 01:19 PM

lol i chuckled at a few parts, hand me down line was gold. keep it up zen

YDK 05-01-2013 07:56 PM

this was dope bro lol the flow an rhyme fucked wit me but it was nice. just a lil more complex than i was expecting lol nice lil vent tho man you got some nice multies an flow. i wanna read some more thought out shit from you

Dope girl 05-03-2013 11:07 PM

you are dope, Nice Flows & Multis.


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