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_Al_GO_RYTHMIC
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![]() ![]() Broken within by my own thoughts reflecting in deflecting them another opening in my heart to be tore apart by criticism once again I am in no competition when my composition comes kicking in I am my own man call me a nomad I just riddle them and move on like I should be on Ritalin I'd toss the guitar after I cut the strings an rig up the fiddle than I refuse to bow an not blow every syllable ta pieces, bits and shreds I re-light an refuse an develop a bomb ass style instead the thought that your not worth it get rid of it.. get that shit out ya.. your misread cause when you look up you expose the harder side of your head
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This was interesting. more of a statement than anything
maybe reassuring yourself as well as others. had a nice flow to it the shorter segments of bars should have allowed more to be added but leaving a piece where it is at is often what I do unless compelled to do more keep writing
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Thanks for the feed. I agree some times I add more and other times I'm just not in the mood.
I should of made the title Faliure
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