Week 10: Witty (2-0) vs. Dynomight (1-0) - WITTY WINS VIA NS

For Battling · 08-20-2018, 06:16 PM

COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411

IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding

MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES

PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT

@Witty @Dynomight

Witty · 08-20-2018, 07:31 PM

Hi.

Witty · 08-24-2018, 08:08 PM

It's movie time.

This pistol a Predator, it separates flesh from bone...leave ur skeletal mesh exposed
Nah fuck that it's an Alien...n these babies inside'll make your faggot lil chest explode

For Battling · 08-25-2018, 06:02 AM

Witty Wins via no show

OPEN FOR FEED

Flow · 08-25-2018, 06:47 AM

Set up made this. Without this would of been been a miss. However the set up here worked the angle in well an this was a fresh gun bar. Props. An glad to see your actively battling again foxy

For Battling · 08-25-2018, 08:41 AM

Witty that setup was fresh af, excellent wording, flow, and execution. However I think you kinda cagged it with your second line. Felt rushed and incomplete or not done to its full potential.

Cashius · 08-25-2018, 09:55 PM

Loved the scheme and the imagery. Wasn’t a whole lot going on as far as the actual concept for me. I would’ve tried to find a different tie in than “babies”. I know what you’re referring to, I just think you could’ve taken a different route with the concept. Still, given all that it was a well written bar.

Plot · 08-26-2018, 01:25 AM

Nice bar Witty the flow and rhymes were great, subject matter was a little played and the 'babies' word felt a little off. It didnt quite work like that either, the eggs had the face-huggers that impregated the aliens so... still it was cool

08-20-2018, 06:16 PM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Week 10: Witty (2-0) vs. Dynomight (1-0) - WITTY WINS VIA NS COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411 IMPORTANT RULES: - No biting - No swaying - No recycling - No feeding MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY VOTING ENDS SUNDAY NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT @Witty @Dynomight

08-20-2018, 07:31 PM	#2
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Hi. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-24-2018, 08:08 PM	#3
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	It's movie time. This pistol a Predator, it separates flesh from bone...leave ur skeletal mesh exposed Nah fuck that it's an Alien...n these babies inside'll make your faggot lil chest explode __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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08-25-2018, 06:02 AM	#4
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Witty Wins via no show OPEN FOR FEED

08-25-2018, 08:41 AM	#6
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Witty that setup was fresh af, excellent wording, flow, and execution. However I think you kinda cagged it with your second line. Felt rushed and incomplete or not done to its full potential.

08-25-2018, 09:55 PM	#7
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	Loved the scheme and the imagery. Wasn’t a whole lot going on as far as the actual concept for me. I would’ve tried to find a different tie in than “babies”. I know what you’re referring to, I just think you could’ve taken a different route with the concept. Still, given all that it was a well written bar.

08-26-2018, 01:25 AM	#8
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Nice bar Witty the flow and rhymes were great, subject matter was a little played and the 'babies' word felt a little off. It didnt quite work like that either, the eggs had the face-huggers that impregated the aliens so... still it was cool