Week 10: Witty (2-0) vs. Dynomight (1-0) - WITTY WINS VIA NS
 

COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411


IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding


MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES


PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT

@Witty @Dynomight

Hi.

It's movie time.

This pistol a Predator, it separates flesh from bone...leave ur skeletal mesh exposed
Nah fuck that it's an Alien...n these babies inside'll make your faggot lil chest explode

Witty Wins via no show

OPEN FOR FEED

Set up made this. Without this would of been been a miss. However the set up here worked the angle in well an this was a fresh gun bar. Props. An glad to see your actively battling again foxy

Witty that setup was fresh af, excellent wording, flow, and execution. However I think you kinda cagged it with your second line. Felt rushed and incomplete or not done to its full potential.

Loved the scheme and the imagery. Wasn’t a whole lot going on as far as the actual concept for me. I would’ve tried to find a different tie in than “babies”. I know what you’re referring to, I just think you could’ve taken a different route with the concept. Still, given all that it was a well written bar.

Nice bar Witty the flow and rhymes were great, subject matter was a little played and the 'babies' word felt a little off. It didnt quite work like that either, the eggs had the face-huggers that impregated the aliens so... still it was cool