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Foreva us, neva them.
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![]() NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12pm pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @Diablo @Cred Last edited by Allen Knight; 08-28-2016 at 09:37 PM. |
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The Biggest
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Cash.
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Badgerdick
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gun bar king?
bitch u never been a goon, if I discredit cuz I dont believe ANYTHING you do.. aint no respect in this for you, so imma catch ya in the A.M and give Cred it where its dew Last edited by Diablo; 08-31-2016 at 09:51 AM. |
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The Biggest
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45 n a 40 'll smother his brain, shoot em up til hes covered in flames
Fuck the remains. 2 horns pointed at ur head have u meet the 1 u were named @Diablo |
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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CRED got it. Diablo was muddled & played.
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Scream
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I have Cred here.
Havent seen diablo's but cred was harder and straight to the point. cred it where its due was a cool idea.. but in a 2 line battle im going w/ impact here. thats where creds hit more home for me. vote cred |
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Banned
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Diablo's was too wordy and played on Cred
Horns used as a term for guns is new to me & I think that was a reach but it wasn't bad Vote cred |
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Round 1 fight
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I liked both bars here. but creds was harsher
vote cred |
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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Both were pretty fresh..
Cred had a lil more creativeness in word play here... D had a hard hitter tho... came down to cleaner set up cuz both punches about the same impact Gotta roll wit Cred Nice shit |
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Ad mini tator
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Diablo came with it unfortunately cred did aswell lol
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Senior Member
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Cred had the more complex line and the better payoff. Diablo, set up and punch were too disparate.
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death warmed over
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Yeah I too thought cred got it. Like inf was saying just had more of an impact...so yeah vote/cred
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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Diablo forced the second internal rhyme, which really muddled up the entire bar in terms of phrasing. The concept was weak, too, though, and undoubtedly played. Cred had an OK concept that was executed very well.
Vote: Cred
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