Hush 3-2 Vs IamRhetoric 2-2 { Hush wins }

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Hush @IAmRhetoric

[Hush]

Ready when you are

[IAmRhetoric]

you want to do 16 n give everybody a good battle?

[IAmRhetoric]

Time for battle, i'm angered and i'm throwing straight hooks,
Get tough behind the keyboard n have your whole crew tagged without joining an event on Facebook
You need to wait crook, before the dude get the two chromes
n then ya squad gettin locked w/o keys like teenage group homes
Hush's bitch acted up until I rocked the disgusting whore,
he stepped up
nothing more, then I had the DE-at-H, ironic it was knocking at his fucking door,
Stupid mark, we know you're a played wack person,
Funny ur crew name is SS, and one of the members is a gay black german
You lack purpose, only thing u do is post bout the negativity in this rapping stricture,
hush aint positive about his security,
So watch me wash this chump w/ the ink n then we'll see more clips getting processed than snapping a picture,
u know i'm clapping it quicker, hush more overhyped than gay ray-bands
don't act tough, fag, or you'll watch me hop out the whip n then see more arms in the air than the nae-nae dance..
you probably wear gay pants, nigga you're a wet noodle, so spaghetti, stop,
He make that move n I start to shoot, u can say I trap'd queen like fetty wap
I keep the strap, blow ya head back cuz I'm a speedy gunner
Faggot swear that he hood but never seen keys like Stevie Wonder
@Hush
dropped early 4 u

[Hush]

@Sharp this kid dont stand a chance right? dont answer that.. im catching a body
my only rhetoric kill question is, should I finish him with the mag or the shotty
this must feel like the big time for u, pussy I bet ya heart racing
nows your chance to leave a mark on the league... be sure to pose for the chalk tracing
I'm the type to sell u a bad batch on purpose.. like heres a gram for a dub
junkie u can die from a bump like shoulder checking the wrong dude at the club
south jerz full rednecks so fuck the entire state where ur fam sleepin
cuz when my squad set up a cross fire it aint nothing like one of ya klan meetings
beef with me is when goons at ur front door to come merk you
u fly threw a wall all red with your face in your chest, this is no kool aid commercial
revolver long as the memorial weekend armed to leave u scarred an leaking
the only 6 cylinders you riding with belong to that piece of shit car u leasing
mention me by name? Well I'll make u famous bro, its about time
ironic U called for Suicide and you've never been in more need of a hotline
whatever whatever, blam blam let that semi spray
the fuck kinda name is rhetoric when nobody asking about u anyway

[Greed]

Time for battle, i'm angered and i'm throwing straight hooks,
Get tough behind the keyboard n have your whole crew tagged without joining an event on Facebook
Wayy too wordy

You need to wait crook, before the dude get the two chromes
n then ya squad gettin locked w/o keys like teenage group homes
Ehh

Hush's bitch acted up until I rocked the disgusting whore,
he stepped up
nothing more, then I had the DE-at-H, ironic it was knocking at his fucking door,
Worded terribly

Stupid mark, we know you're a played wack person,
Funny ur crew name is SS, and one of the members is a gay black german
Ehh

You lack purpose, only thing u do is post bout the negativity in this rapping stricture,
hush aint positive about his security,
So watch me wash this chump w/ the ink n then we'll see more clips getting processed than snapping a picture,
Bro this is way too long

u know i'm clapping it quicker, hush more overhyped than gay ray-bands
don't act tough, fag, or you'll watch me hop out the whip n then see more arms in the air than the nae-nae dance..
Weak

you probably wear gay pants, nigga you're a wet noodle, so spaghetti, stop,
He make that move n I start to shoot, u can say I trap'd queen like fetty wap
No

I keep the strap, blow ya head back cuz I'm a speedy gunner
Faggot swear that he hood but never seen keys like Stevie Wonder
I am dissapoint

@Sharpthis kid dont stand a chance right? dont answer that.. im catching a body
my only rhetoric kill question is, should I finish him with the mag or the shotty
Weak

this must feel like the big time for u, pussy I bet ya heart racing
nows your chance to leave a mark on the league... be sure to pose for the chalk tracing
Somebody had a mark line i liked more last week

I'm the type to sell u a bad batch on purpose.. like heres a gram for a dub
junkie u can die from a bump like shoulder checking the wrong dude at the club
Okay

south jerz full rednecks so fuck the entire state where ur fam sleepin
cuz when my squad set up a cross fire it aint nothing like one of ya klan meetings
Thought you were going a different way but this is cool

beef with me is when goons at ur front door to come merk you
u fly threw a wall all red with your face in your chest, this is no kool aid commercial
Ehh okay

revolver long as the memorial weekend armed to leave u scarred an leaking
the only 6 cylinders you riding with belong to that piece of shit car u leasing
Heh

mention me by name? Well I'll make u famous bro, its about time
ironic U called for Suicide and you've never been in more need of a hotline
Choppy wording

whatever whatever, blam blam let that semi spray
the fuck kinda name is rhetoric when nobody asking about u anyway
Nah

Not a great read

V hush

[Ace]

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bump
crossfire

hush was overall better.. FB line was tight but as the verse progressed it was losiing luster for me. starting with the 3 line steeze.. the punch itself was almost 40 syllables, that is pretty ridiculous.

vote Hush

[Lotto Smirk]

Hush took this one sided
Had koolaid shit was Ill,bump line was nice don't think you was trying as ya got to the end

Wasn't really feeling rhetoric which was disappointing considering said to have bars for hush

Vote hush

[Bust]

Time for battle, i'm angered and i'm throwing straight hooks,
Get tough behind the keyboard n have your whole crew tagged without joining an event on Facebook
I liked this

You need to wait crook, before the dude get the two chromes
n then ya squad gettin locked w/o keys like teenage group homes
Shoulda worked the concept better

Hush's bitch acted up until I rocked the disgusting whore,
he stepped up
nothing more, then I had the DE-at-H, ironic it was knocking at his fucking door,
Wording took away from the impact

Stupid mark, we know you're a played wack person,
Funny ur crew name is SS, and one of the members is a gay black german
Ehh,

You lack purpose, only thing u do is post bout the negativity in this rapping stricture,
hush aint positive about his security,
So watch me wash this chump w/ the ink n then we'll see more clips getting processed than snapping a picture,
Too wordy,

u know i'm clapping it quicker, hush more overhyped than gay ray-bands
don't act tough, fag, or you'll watch me hop out the whip n then see more arms in the air than the nae-nae dance..
Nah

you probably wear gay pants, nigga you're a wet noodle, so spaghetti, stop,
He make that move n I start to shoot, u can say I trap'd queen like fetty
Weak

I keep the strap, blow ya head back cuz I'm a speedy gunner
Faggot swear that he hood but never seen keys like Stevie Wonder
Played

I feel like u got some could concepts just need a tie ur set ups in more n tighten the lines a lil it's like ur using to many words for simple concepts n either referencing them bad or not utilizing ur set to to help um.. U'll be aight tho..

Vs

@Sharp this kid dont stand a chance right? dont answer that.. im catching a body
my only rhetoric kill question is, should I finish him with the mag or the
Kinda ok

this must feel like the big time for u, pussy I bet ya heart racing
nows your chance to leave a mark on the league... be sure to pose for the chalk tracing
Cool

I'm the type to sell u a bad batch on purpose.. like heres a gram for a dub
junkie u can die from a bump like shoulder checking the wrong dude at the club
I liked this

south jerz full rednecks so fuck the entire state where ur fam sleepin
cuz when my squad set up a cross fire it aint nothing like one of ya klan meetings
Lol

beef with me is when goons at ur front door to come merk you
u fly threw a wall all red with your face in your chest, this is no kool aid commercial
Lmao, that shit was funny

revolver long as the memorial weekend armed to leave u scarred an leaking
the only 6 cylinders you riding with belong to that piece of shit car u leasing
Ehh

mention me by name? Well I'll make u famous bro, its about time
ironic U called for Suicide and you've never been in more need of a hotline
Oooook

whatever whatever, blam blam let that semi spray
the fuck kinda name is rhetoric when nobody asking about u anyway
_________careless obviously

Vote hush, creative, some good flips all around just a better structured verse n smoother read.. Nice yall dropped early af, good shit

Hush