Lotto Smirk (0-1) vs Seyance (0-0) - LOTTO WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 28th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Lotto Smirk @Seyance

[Lotto Smirk]

12 or 14

[Seyance]

yeah yeah.

[Lotto Smirk]

Gonna need ext

[Lotto Smirk]

Sorry man been busy only got 10 @Seyance

Smash this foreigners eyes in,till it's bruised n battered shut
Fuck up this euros vision .. Till he's singing for the docs to stitch it up
Spiritual shit,I'll kill him quick his name don't mean a thing
seance contacting the dead,he's only asking what's his future when he meets them gonna bring
robbed last week,Was wack g should of asked ya for advice
Cuz I couldn't retire muff, but you'd know best as ya been doing that ya whole life
Girls begging for my dick, he gets a sighting n then he quits
Cuz the only way he getting wood is if he is buying the new Jordan kicks
This guy is getting beat quick,him thinking anything else is crazy
Cuz I'm tearing this seance up like we in ghost n I'm Patrick swazy

[Seyance]

i'm gunning for the title and your more than hating..
your a stumbling block in the way that your dumb and you lack coordination
i'm bringing blood shed till this cunts dead and a certain disgrace,
i'll chop and dice him into a lotto slices.. then wipe the smirk off my face
your tracks are garbage, how the fuck could you challenge me..
NOBODY wants to sellotape, you've become unstuck from reality.
you know you should stop speaking when..
you've become like man united. couldn't even buy a decent 10
last week you tussled with muff and somehow it was all gay..
he didn't feel a thing, you were the hotdog getting thrown down the hallway.

[Allen Knight]

UPPPIN FOR VOTES

[Allen Knight]

Smash this foreigners eyes in,till it's bruised n battered shut
Fuck up this euros vision .. Till he's singing for the docs to stitch it up

Vs

your tracks are garbage, how the fuck could you challenge me..
NOBODY wants to sellotape, you've become unstuck from reality.

V/lotto, this was close as fuck, both had some misses, tied in quotes, i think
lotto had LOTB shit was nice, he wins imo, but could go either way, but i think both are still
rusty tbh. props to both on the battle.

[8===D~~~~(}:]

I already voted on this bar for bar so I'm not gonna do it again sorry, lotto didn't really have anything I liked, the "singing to the doc" line was decent but that's all. Sequence had a few meh lines then some misses, and one line that I feel was LOTB even tho it's a bit corny and possibly played, "hotdog". I'm voting Seyance

[Tic]

I have lotto taking this barely. He had the opener and maybeeee the muff line. Other than that I didn't like the wording. Seyance had a couple almosts but the wording killed most of them. Both seems rushed.

Lotto

[~RustyGunZ~]

Seyance had a good middle 3. Nothing to great but not bad at all. Closer was weak opener was eh.

Vs

Retire Muff and wood shoes even though I saw it already were good. The two seance ones were blah. Bad wording and shouldn't have used it twice. Euro vision okay.

Eh. Close. Nothing great but not terrible. I thought for cleaner wording I got it edged to

Vote seyance

[Allen Knight]

3-2 UPPPINNNN

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Smash this foreigners eyes in,till it's bruised n battered shut
Fuck up this euros vision .. Till he's singing for the docs to stitch it up
weak wp
Spiritual shit,I'll kill him quick his name don't mean a thing
seance contacting the dead,he's only asking what's his future when he meets them gonna bring
bad wording
robbed last week,Was wack g should of asked ya for advice
Cuz I couldn't retire muff, but you'd know best as ya been doing that ya whole life
awkward wording but concept was ok
Girls begging for my dick, he gets a sighting n then he quits
Cuz the only way he getting wood is if he is buying the new Jordan kicks
didn't like this
This guy is getting beat quick,him thinking anything else is crazy
Cuz I'm tearing this seance up like we in ghost n I'm Patrick swazy
simple wp

Originally Posted by Seyance

i'm gunning for the title and your more than hating..
your a stumbling block in the way that your dumb and you lack coordination
bad wording
i'm bringing blood shed till this cunts dead and a certain disgrace,
i'll chop and dice him into a lotto slices.. then wipe the smirk off my face
could have hit with better wording
your tracks are garbage, how the fuck could you challenge me..
NOBODY wants to sellotape, you've become unstuck from reality.
not sure what this was supposed to mean
you know you should stop speaking when..
you've become like man united. couldn't even buy a decent 10
need harsher wording for this to hit
last week you tussled with muff and somehow it was all gay..
he didn't feel a thing, you were the hotdog getting thrown down the hallway
no homo

Didn't like much from either. Both verses felt rushed because the wording was rough. Seyance didn't really have much in the way of wp, so while Lotto also had misses, he gets my vote for better concepts.

Vote Lotto Smirk

[El Muffin]

Lotto had better concepts but absolutely atrocious wording. and that's coming from me lol

Them gonna bring?

Are u rastafarian?

Seyance had less complex concepts but his wording/flow n overall execution 2as better

no real quotes from either

Alot of jabs

But sey got it imo


V/seyance

[murda sho]

Seyance

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Lotto

This guy is getting beat quick,him thinking anything else is crazy
Cuz I'm tearing this seance up like we in ghost n I'm Patrick swazy


This battle was terrible... both of y'all need to come better than this or be prepared to stay at the bottom of the ranks. Seance i've known you for years and I know you can drop 10x doper than this... Lotto I barely got this quote out of your verse but it was the best bar of the battle to me... for this I give the dub to Lotto