What is your favorite verse that you've ever written?

Split · 08-07-2014, 07:21 AM

Favorite verse?

oats · 08-07-2014, 07:27 AM

wait, favorite verse or favorite verse title?

for verses, it's tough to say. for a while I def had a single verse that I thought was my best, and as such counted as my favorite, but since then I've written a lot of verses that I think are good, as well as some that I don't think are my best by I personally like them a lot. That being said.

Favorite verse: Where Canterbury Stops (one of my best verses + I beat Sacrifice with it, who I respect and admire greatly)
Favorite title: Psychoanalyze Me Like One of Your French Girls

Paradigm · 08-07-2014, 07:50 AM

I don't know about any particular verses being my favorite... but the two I enjoyed the most writing were

1. Tag match vs Blue Bayou and Beyond because talking shit back and forth on AIM to them was fun. Bouncing bars back and forth with SubtleT was fun. The hype of it all was fun. There is no comradery really on netcees like there was on IHH.
2. "Pink Slip" battle vs Dia because I was sick of his bullshit plaguing the site and writing 50lines of nothing but ether was ridiculous. Think Broke Lesnar personals on a scale of x100. Then of course that signature pretty much going viral across text boards was the icing on the cake. AND coming back from a hiatus of almost three years to see that shit STILL floating around is hilarious to me. lols.

Split · 08-07-2014, 07:53 AM

I remember that Canterbury verse.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paradigm

I was sick of his bullshit plaguing the site and writing 50lines of nothing but ether was ridiculous. Think Broke Lesnar personals on a scale of x100. Then of course that signature pretty much going viral across text boards was the icing on the cake. AND coming back from a hiatus of almost three years to see that shit STILL floating around is hilarious to me. lols.

link?

Paradigm · 08-07-2014, 07:55 AM

to the verse? It's gone forever to the black hole of the interwebs

sral · 08-07-2014, 08:55 AM

mine changes over time, i enjoy diff ones for diff reasons

PancakeBrah · 08-07-2014, 09:34 AM

IDDDDIIIIOOOOTTTTT

it can never be found again :(

Certain · 08-07-2014, 09:47 AM

It's almost always the last thing I wrote, so I guess the 12 lines I sent to @Witty last night.

Witty · 08-07-2014, 09:57 AM

Which was dope, I shall be responding once I finish work.

I dunno what my favourite is...I forget most of them.

dead man · 08-07-2014, 10:54 AM

ever???

fuck idk. i recently printed out that yolasite archive i put together and it ended up being around 130 pages. so thats a lot to consider.

probably 'warfare in the streets of nirvana'. circa 2008 or so. completely different from anything i do now. when i was still writing giant epics consisting of fight scenes and samurai adventures. great times

Malachi · 08-07-2014, 10:55 AM

Prolly The Verse I wrote for my Type 2 Diabetes collab wit sharp & Campbell

Or battle wise

My newbie Tourny VI finals verse

YDK · 08-07-2014, 11:05 AM

Prolly the artist's blues solely because I beat beyond with it tbh

Had a few new favorites this past aowl season tho

Diode · 08-07-2014, 11:08 AM

that time i beat RC in a 64-line battle or something ridiculous.

dull boy · 08-07-2014, 11:19 AM

Hard to narrow it down. I could probably pick 5 or so.

kannon · 08-07-2014, 11:22 AM

Probably this one: http://kickthekan.bandcamp.com/track...-camera-lights

It's all one long verse. It had been like a year since i'd written anything, and this was kind of just everything in my head spilling out into one long verse. People seemed to like it too.

Greed · 08-07-2014, 11:30 AM

Battle wise probably my sf against pc

Song wise is things to come and flashing lights. The lyrics were good enough not to need reassurance and I havent put them on any site. I need to upload those from the usb now that I mention it.

Objective · 08-07-2014, 11:53 AM

I think I might have lost my fav verse forever, maybe it's still saved on my nearly broken laptop that it takes 3-4 times to boot. It was part of one of the battles in the International StoryTelling League right before the epic fail known as TextStars.com. The picture given was pretty cool, some fishes photoshopped inside a lightbulb with water and some stuff you see in regular aquariums. Found the sketch I saved on Gmail but I rephrased everything and removed 80% of those lines. Kinda sucks as I'm never really satisfied with anything that I write.

Chyeahhh!!! · 08-07-2014, 12:37 PM

Got a lot of em lost on netcees one. Was more hungry in my early years I'd have to say battle verses 03 04 circa and open mics 2010 and 2011 was some of my best material. When I was going to war with cats in the open mic on I'll community back in 05 06 really brought out the beast but beef usually does Lol. Those back n forths were nuts Lol....20 to 30 bars of soul burning shit

Chyeahhh!!! · 08-07-2014, 12:40 PM

Oh and my little back n forth with god of war verses on netcees one Smh damn a lot of people didn't even catch most of what I said cause it was so personal Lol me and him has years of history but were cool as shit..just fun sparring

Certain · 08-07-2014, 12:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kannon

Probably this one: http://kickthekan.bandcamp.com/track...-camera-lights

It's all one long verse. It had been like a year since i'd written anything, and this was kind of just everything in my head spilling out into one long verse. People seemed to like it too.

OK, more of a Slug and Kno hybrid. I liked this a lot. The beat is great.

08-07-2014, 07:21 AM	#1
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899398	What is your favorite verse that you've ever written? Favorite verse? __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com Last edited by Split; 08-07-2014 at 07:47 AM.

08-07-2014, 07:27 AM	#2
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	wait, favorite verse or favorite verse title? for verses, it's tough to say. for a while I def had a single verse that I thought was my best, and as such counted as my favorite, but since then I've written a lot of verses that I think are good, as well as some that I don't think are my best by I personally like them a lot. That being said. Favorite verse: Where Canterbury Stops (one of my best verses + I beat Sacrifice with it, who I respect and admire greatly) Favorite title: Psychoanalyze Me Like One of Your French Girls __________________ You should be water

08-07-2014, 09:57 AM	#9
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Which was dope, I shall be responding once I finish work. I dunno what my favourite is...I forget most of them. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

08-07-2014, 10:54 AM	#10
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	ever??? fuck idk. i recently printed out that yolasite archive i put together and it ended up being around 130 pages. so thats a lot to consider. probably 'warfare in the streets of nirvana'. circa 2008 or so. completely different from anything i do now. when i was still writing giant epics consisting of fight scenes and samurai adventures. great times __________________ Zack Wicks for president

08-07-2014, 10:55 AM	#11
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,529 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877410	Prolly The Verse I wrote for my Type 2 Diabetes collab wit sharp & Campbell Or battle wise My newbie Tourny VI finals verse __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

08-07-2014, 07:50 AM	#3
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033512	I don't know about any particular verses being my favorite... but the two I enjoyed the most writing were 1. Tag match vs Blue Bayou and Beyond because talking shit back and forth on AIM to them was fun. Bouncing bars back and forth with SubtleT was fun. The hype of it all was fun. There is no comradery really on netcees like there was on IHH. 2. "Pink Slip" battle vs Dia because I was sick of his bullshit plaguing the site and writing 50lines of nothing but ether was ridiculous. Think Broke Lesnar personals on a scale of x100. Then of course that signature pretty much going viral across text boards was the icing on the cake. AND coming back from a hiatus of almost three years to see that shit STILL floating around is hilarious to me. lols.

08-07-2014, 07:55 AM	#5
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033512	to the verse? It's gone forever to the black hole of the interwebs

08-07-2014, 08:55 AM	#6
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	mine changes over time, i enjoy diff ones for diff reasons

08-07-2014, 09:34 AM	#7
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	IDDDDIIIIOOOOTTTTT it can never be found again :(

08-07-2014, 09:47 AM	#8
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	It's almost always the last thing I wrote, so I guess the 12 lines I sent to @Witty last night.

08-07-2014, 11:05 AM	#12
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Prolly the artist's blues solely because I beat beyond with it tbh Had a few new favorites this past aowl season tho __________________

08-07-2014, 11:08 AM	#13
Diode PR's Finest Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 14,165 Battle Record: 12-7 Rep Power: 85899410	that time i beat RC in a 64-line battle or something ridiculous. __________________

08-07-2014, 11:19 AM	#14
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Hard to narrow it down. I could probably pick 5 or so.

08-07-2014, 11:22 AM	#15
kannon kickthekan Join Date: May 2014 Location: fresh coast Posts: 1,204 Battle Record: 9-6 Champed - The Mic Check Rep Power: 22752198	Probably this one: http://kickthekan.bandcamp.com/track...-camera-lights It's all one long verse. It had been like a year since i'd written anything, and this was kind of just everything in my head spilling out into one long verse. People seemed to like it too. __________________ lnk.bio/kickthekan FIRSTCLASS

08-07-2014, 11:30 AM	#16
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Battle wise probably my sf against pc Song wise is things to come and flashing lights. The lyrics were good enough not to need reassurance and I havent put them on any site. I need to upload those from the usb now that I mention it.

08-07-2014, 11:53 AM	#17
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	I think I might have lost my fav verse forever, maybe it's still saved on my nearly broken laptop that it takes 3-4 times to boot. It was part of one of the battles in the International StoryTelling League right before the epic fail known as TextStars.com. The picture given was pretty cool, some fishes photoshopped inside a lightbulb with water and some stuff you see in regular aquariums. Found the sketch I saved on Gmail but I rephrased everything and removed 80% of those lines. Kinda sucks as I'm never really satisfied with anything that I write. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

08-07-2014, 12:37 PM	#18
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	Got a lot of em lost on netcees one. Was more hungry in my early years I'd have to say battle verses 03 04 circa and open mics 2010 and 2011 was some of my best material. When I was going to war with cats in the open mic on I'll community back in 05 06 really brought out the beast but beef usually does Lol. Those back n forths were nuts Lol....20 to 30 bars of soul burning shit

08-07-2014, 12:40 PM	#19
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	Oh and my little back n forth with god of war verses on netcees one Smh damn a lot of people didn't even catch most of what I said cause it was so personal Lol me and him has years of history but were cool as shit..just fun sparring

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