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10-01-2014, 05:15 AM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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YDK vs. Woosah [YDK Wins]
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10-01-2014, 01:06 PM
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This bitch still living off his parents so nobody woo saw has ever been as real as me
but that's not hard to beat Considering his only friends are computer screens, tv's, and DVDs I'm down for the rebuttal if you are @Woosah
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10-01-2014, 06:00 PM
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6ft of Seperation
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Awww B, ya girl wan eat a dick but she claim you seem gay
I'll un-sheath blades & cut two members off DK Aubrey, Wanita. Two members off DK (Danity Kane) I would man but I'm busy with work & writing for Vulgar. Just don't want to if we being honest.
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10-01-2014, 06:25 PM
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Eh. Weak battle
Ydk thats the first 3 liner I ever saw that was so stretched it became a 4 liner It was the setups fault... Woosah. The awww b awww breee wp was forced n the wan eat a tie in was amateur ish It was creative but using internal wp to say something so unnecessary was detrimental to the effect of the punch Aubrey your girl Juanita dick No The punch was ok but the tie ins missrd terribly Fucked up the end result V ydk Hard battle to judge Both made mjr mistake s
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10-01-2014, 10:20 PM
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6ft of Seperation
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I know it don't matter but her names actually Wanita. Lol
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10-01-2014, 11:40 PM
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DOHpe since 02'
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Rofl
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople |
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10-02-2014, 04:06 PM
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didnt like either. but i think woo had the bigger miss
reference and explanation was weak. YDK had a nice setup but his ending fucked it up for him. vote: YDK
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10-02-2014, 04:17 PM
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Name Flips Are Clever
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ydk didnt have to explain his punch, were woosah did & still came off corny.
the better shitty punch goes to YDK.
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10-02-2014, 08:45 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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YDK's setup ran a bit long, and that kind of took the sting out of the 3-line punch. It was direct and somewhat statementish, but that actually played in his favor since I had no idea whatsoever what Woosah was talking ab. I read the bar a cpl times before the explanation and then I googled Danity Kane and it made a bit more sense to me. But the setup didn't feel related to the closer other than the WP and DK tie-in. The delivery wasn't that bad. I was able to pinpoint the flow and go with it. As a whole bar with proper setup and concept support, I have to go with YDK.
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10-03-2014, 08:22 AM
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Y....Super stretched.bro...and average punch compared to ya usual...
Woo...great idea...juz didnt work if u didnt post the names that woulda gone unseen...an how u knowin those.chicks names? Haha... Vote...that Guy, Y |
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10-03-2014, 10:46 AM
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Didn't like the bars dropped but one was just less messy even tho it was drawn out...
v/YDK
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10-03-2014, 09:49 PM
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Both were horrible tbh
Ydk was slightly better I suppose Woo if u have to explain it, don't use it |
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10-04-2014, 10:26 PM
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Wo could of done same with the cutting two members thing.
Ydk took it light but still got it done. Ydk v |
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10-05-2014, 10:37 PM
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it seemed like Woosah wasn't totally in this & spent very little time & made it more than 2 lines on purpose.
YDK lines were good. I looked up "woo" and then realized he was using Woosaw's name as"who saw". I don't know how you fit in these short "middle lines" -- your style intrigues meThe last line could have rhymed better. Not much more to say. /v YDK
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