YDK vs. Woosah [YDK Wins]
 

Rebuttal Option

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This bitch still living off his parents so nobody woo saw has ever been as real as me
but that's not hard to beat
Considering his only friends are computer screens, tv's, and DVDs

I'm down for the rebuttal if you are @Woosah

Awww B, ya girl wan eat a dick but she claim you seem gay
I'll un-sheath blades & cut two members off DK


Aubrey, Wanita. Two members off DK (Danity Kane)

I would man but I'm busy with work & writing for Vulgar. Just don't want to if we being honest.

Eh. Weak battle

Ydk thats the first 3 liner I ever saw that was so stretched it became a 4 liner

It was the setups fault...

Woosah. The awww b awww breee wp was forced n the wan eat a tie in was amateur ish

It was creative but using internal wp to say something so unnecessary was detrimental to the effect of the punch

Aubrey your girl Juanita dick

No

The punch was ok but the tie ins missrd terribly

Fucked up the end result


V ydk

Hard battle to judge

Both made mjr mistake s

I know it don't matter but her names actually Wanita. Lol

Rofl

Repped

didnt like either. but i think woo had the bigger miss
reference and explanation was weak. YDK had a nice
setup but his ending fucked it up for him.


vote: YDK

ydk didnt have to explain his punch, were woosah did & still came off corny.


the better shitty punch goes to YDK.

YDK's setup ran a bit long, and that kind of took the sting out of the 3-line punch. It was direct and somewhat statementish, but that actually played in his favor since I had no idea whatsoever what Woosah was talking ab. I read the bar a cpl times before the explanation and then I googled Danity Kane and it made a bit more sense to me. But the setup didn't feel related to the closer other than the WP and DK tie-in. The delivery wasn't that bad. I was able to pinpoint the flow and go with it. As a whole bar with proper setup and concept support, I have to go with YDK.

v-YDK

Y....Super stretched.bro...and average punch compared to ya usual...

Woo...great idea...juz didnt work if u didnt post the names that woulda gone unseen...an how u knowin those.chicks names? Haha...

Vote...that Guy, Y

Didn't like the bars dropped but one was just less messy even tho it was drawn out...
v/YDK

Both were horrible tbh


Ydk was slightly better I suppose
Woo if u have to explain it, don't use it

Wo could of done same with the cutting two members thing.
Ydk took it light but still got it done.

Ydk v

it seemed like Woosah wasn't totally in this & spent very little time & made it more than 2 lines on purpose.

YDK lines were good. I looked up "woo" and then realized he was using Woosaw's name as"who saw". I don't know how you fit in these short "middle lines" -- your style intrigues meThe last line could have rhymed better.

Not much more to say.

/v YDK