Defiant vs. Unfuckwitable [Unfukwitable Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 09-24-2014, 10:11 PM

Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in)

Due Monday 12am PST

Unfukwitable · 09-25-2014, 09:09 PM

Checkk

Unfukwitable · 09-29-2014, 09:19 PM

Welcome NC's punching bag, This busters not safe
you just hang around to waste-lines,
&Ironically, that bar you dropped week 8, kept Muff in top shape

Defiant · 09-29-2014, 11:28 PM

leave him a mess, punches wont require much disguise
the damage needs 'surgery to unfuk', opposite to the tightest virgin where he doesnt even touch the sides

Camp Bell · 09-30-2014, 12:23 AM

ehhh

didnt really like either but un's was worded terribly
why the second line, didnt even rhyme? defiants
punch was weak. virgin, play on the "unfuck" part
of his name, iono...

vote: defiant

jilti · 09-30-2014, 12:46 AM

This battle was terrible..
vote unfuk for more metaphors crammed into a bar. only thing i could think of

El Muffin · 09-30-2014, 12:51 AM

Defiants was longwinded n executed sloppily

The concept you were attempting 4 was eh tho.

Unfuk said my name so he wins

V unfuk

Lol nah...waste lines dated but the muff ref. Legit even tho im not fat fuck u nigga. Im apollo esque

Wordz AhGod · 09-30-2014, 01:01 AM

v/unfuckwitable tho the line wasn't too hot it was better then Defiants, just a tad stretched tho but I see it.

Blanco Bishop · 09-30-2014, 01:30 AM

Un was crisper n read fluidly. Def was cool but i had to keep rereading for the flow.

Thought un worded it better n also had better execution.

Good battle fellas.

V un

BROKE LESNAR · 09-30-2014, 05:49 AM

I think Def's major hang up was "opposite to the tightest virgin". Idk know if there was another way for you to reword it, I'm tired, but that fragment hurt the delivery. It wasn't a terrible bar. I liked the way u flipped his name.

Fuk's bar for the most part was cool. Welcome NC punching bag read weird to me. Lol. But after that it was smooth. Waistline wp was a tough call to go with.

v-Fuk

Packed Graves · 09-30-2014, 06:28 AM

Horrible wording good concept vs over wording a shitty concept = unfuk with the better attempt.

Tic · 09-30-2014, 10:44 AM

Man...........Unfuk had a meh bar that I wasn't too fond of, but Defiant's attempt was comparable to a Muzzl3 vote.

Unfuk.

murda sho · 09-30-2014, 03:18 PM

why the hell did y'all stretch y'all bars out like that? whatever its your style I guess, i didn't like either of them but ima vote Unfuk for the better of the bad punches

v/ Unfuk

09-24-2014, 10:11 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Defiant vs. Unfuckwitable [Unfukwitable Wins] Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in) Due Monday 12am PST

09-25-2014, 09:09 PM	#2
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Checkk __________________ WICKeD

09-29-2014, 09:19 PM	#3
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Welcome NC's punching bag, This busters not safe you just hang around to waste-lines, &Ironically, that bar you dropped week 8, kept Muff in top shape __________________ WICKeD

09-29-2014, 11:28 PM	#4
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	leave him a mess, punches wont require much disguise the damage needs 'surgery to unfuk', opposite to the tightest virgin where he doesnt even touch the sides Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 09-29-2014 at 11:42 PM.

09-30-2014, 12:23 AM	#5
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	ehhh didnt really like either but un's was worded terribly why the second line, didnt even rhyme? defiants punch was weak. virgin, play on the "unfuck" part of his name, iono... vote: defiant __________________ get high. write rhymes.

09-30-2014, 12:46 AM	#6
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	This battle was terrible.. vote unfuk for more metaphors crammed into a bar. only thing i could think of

09-30-2014, 12:51 AM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Defiants was longwinded n executed sloppily The concept you were attempting 4 was eh tho. Unfuk said my name so he wins V unfuk Lol nah...waste lines dated but the muff ref. Legit even tho im not fat fuck u nigga. Im apollo esque __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

09-30-2014, 01:01 AM	#8
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	v/unfuckwitable tho the line wasn't too hot it was better then Defiants, just a tad stretched tho but I see it.

09-30-2014, 01:30 AM	#9
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Un was crisper n read fluidly. Def was cool but i had to keep rereading for the flow. Thought un worded it better n also had better execution. Good battle fellas. V un

09-30-2014, 05:49 AM	#10
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	I think Def's major hang up was "opposite to the tightest virgin". Idk know if there was another way for you to reword it, I'm tired, but that fragment hurt the delivery. It wasn't a terrible bar. I liked the way u flipped his name. Fuk's bar for the most part was cool. Welcome NC punching bag read weird to me. Lol. But after that it was smooth. Waistline wp was a tough call to go with. v-Fuk

09-30-2014, 06:28 AM	#11
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Horrible wording good concept vs over wording a shitty concept = unfuk with the better attempt. __________________ back

09-30-2014, 10:44 AM	#12
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	Man...........Unfuk had a meh bar that I wasn't too fond of, but Defiant's attempt was comparable to a Muzzl3 vote. Unfuk.

09-30-2014, 03:18 PM	#13
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	why the hell did y'all stretch y'all bars out like that? whatever its your style I guess, i didn't like either of them but ima vote Unfuk for the better of the bad punches v/ Unfuk __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"