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BROKE LESNAR 09-24-2014 10:11 PM

Defiant vs. Unfuckwitable [Unfukwitable Wins]
 
Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in)

Due Monday 12am PST

Unfukwitable 09-25-2014 09:09 PM

Checkk

Unfukwitable 09-29-2014 09:19 PM

Welcome NC's punching bag, This busters not safe
you just hang around to waste-lines,
&Ironically, that bar you dropped week 8, kept Muff in top shape

Defiant 09-29-2014 11:28 PM

leave him a mess, punches wont require much disguise
the damage needs 'surgery to unfuk', opposite to the tightest virgin where he doesnt even touch the sides

Camp Bell 09-30-2014 12:23 AM

ehhh

didnt really like either but un's was worded terribly
why the second line, didnt even rhyme? defiants
punch was weak. virgin, play on the "unfuck" part
of his name, iono...


vote: defiant

jilti 09-30-2014 12:46 AM

This battle was terrible..
vote unfuk for more metaphors crammed into a bar. only thing i could think of

El Muffin 09-30-2014 12:51 AM

Defiants was longwinded n executed sloppily

The concept you were attempting 4 was eh tho.

Unfuk said my name so he wins





V unfuk



Lol nah...waste lines dated but the muff ref. Legit even tho im not fat fuck u nigga. Im apollo esque

Wordz AhGod 09-30-2014 01:01 AM

v/unfuckwitable tho the line wasn't too hot it was better then Defiants, just a tad stretched tho but I see it.

Blanco Bishop 09-30-2014 01:30 AM

Un was crisper n read fluidly. Def was cool but i had to keep rereading for the flow.

Thought un worded it better n also had better execution.

Good battle fellas.

V un

BROKE LESNAR 09-30-2014 05:49 AM

I think Def's major hang up was "opposite to the tightest virgin". Idk know if there was another way for you to reword it, I'm tired, but that fragment hurt the delivery. It wasn't a terrible bar. I liked the way u flipped his name.

Fuk's bar for the most part was cool. Welcome NC punching bag read weird to me. Lol. But after that it was smooth. Waistline wp was a tough call to go with.

v-Fuk

Packed Graves 09-30-2014 06:28 AM

Horrible wording good concept vs over wording a shitty concept = unfuk with the better attempt.

Tic 09-30-2014 10:44 AM

Man...........Unfuk had a meh bar that I wasn't too fond of, but Defiant's attempt was comparable to a Muzzl3 vote.

Unfuk.

murda sho 09-30-2014 03:18 PM

why the hell did y'all stretch y'all bars out like that? whatever its your style I guess, i didn't like either of them but ima vote Unfuk for the better of the bad punches

v/ Unfuk


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