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07-29-2013, 07:17 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: San Andreas, CA
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Too Gas'd Up
My niggas make a show off a no show
It's go hard or go home On your computer you can only hold off for so long You can't have power like that You know how to write back You fuck up a key bored? Doing that coward type act? I'll give you hell -- they don't call me deep for nothin I wish you well...to a place you can't bring a cup in No water stashed to drink Are your drawers gasoline'd? You gas'd up anyways -- That quote's all but half complete (?) Motherfucka die or dream of the devil I'm low down & disrespectful, bitch sink to my level |
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07-31-2013, 01:28 PM
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shit was short so i aint bout to go in in no depth.
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wdeva, for some throw away shit i thought this was cool, nothing more, nothing less #1 |
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08-01-2013, 01:38 AM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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Not enough of us write about one of the subjects we know best: being on these boards. You vented frustration over all the normal shit battlers have to deal with. There wasn't anything great in this verse, but it got to the point.
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08-01-2013, 03:28 AM
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short sweet. to the point. i liked it.
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08-01-2013, 09:49 AM
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Lol I agree w/ copypat, short / sweet feelin it... Didnt think u were serious at first, than kept reading an def enjoyed it
Keep dropping g
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08-01-2013, 10:49 AM
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BITER
Join Date: Mar 2013
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not bad at all for real
kinda short post more of your longer shizz plz |
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08-01-2013, 11:12 AM
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wasn't feeling it - well no it wasn't bad but it wasn't exactly good. Didn't seem like there was much effort to it.
Id rather see something you put more then a key of effort into before making an actual feedback post
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08-01-2013, 11:29 AM
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BITER
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Location: San Andreas, CA
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08-01-2013, 02:55 PM
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i didnt get it
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