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SpookyDeep 07-29-2013 07:17 PM

Too Gas'd Up
 
My niggas make a show off a no show
It's go hard or go home
On your computer you can only hold off for so long
You can't have power like that
You know how to write back
You fuck up a key bored? Doing that coward type act?
I'll give you hell -- they don't call me deep for nothin
I wish you well...to a place you can't bring a cup in
No water stashed to drink
Are your drawers gasoline'd?
You gas'd up anyways -- That quote's all but half complete (?)
Motherfucka die or dream of the devil
I'm low down & disrespectful, bitch sink to my level

Pakistani Hand Cannon 07-31-2013 01:28 PM

shit was short so i aint bout to go in in no depth.
Quote:

I'll give you hell -- they don't call me deep for nothin
I wish you well...to a place you can't bring a cup in
^ that was live minus the image of a cup n shit

wdeva, for some throw away shit i thought this was cool, nothing more, nothing less

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Certain 08-01-2013 01:38 AM

Not enough of us write about one of the subjects we know best: being on these boards. You vented frustration over all the normal shit battlers have to deal with. There wasn't anything great in this verse, but it got to the point.

CopyPat 08-01-2013 03:28 AM

short sweet. to the point. i liked it.

Sho Money EMG 08-01-2013 09:49 AM

Lol I agree w/ copypat, short / sweet feelin it... Didnt think u were serious at first, than kept reading an def enjoyed it

Keep dropping g

Brian Bryan 08-01-2013 10:49 AM

not bad at all for real

kinda short

post more of your longer shizz plz

Flow 08-01-2013 11:12 AM

wasn't feeling it - well no it wasn't bad but it wasn't exactly good. Didn't seem like there was much effort to it.

Id rather see something you put more then a key of effort into before making an actual feedback post

SpookyDeep 08-01-2013 11:29 AM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=9365

Darth Yoda 08-01-2013 02:55 PM

i didnt get it


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