Camp Bell vs. YDK - YDK wins

Meth · 08-14-2014, 12:39 AM

The 1-2 Punch League

Due Monday Midnight Pacific

@Camp Bell @YDK

YDK · 08-14-2014, 07:30 AM

check

Camp Bell · 08-14-2014, 10:57 AM

...yup.

YDK · 08-15-2014, 08:33 PM

Ima smash your head through the coffee table, somebody grab me a body bag
Cuz ringing camp's bell is light work; you ole hunchback of the couch looking fag

Camp Bell · 08-15-2014, 11:28 PM

the 3 letter man lame, wack and wont blaze a can
i'll cap at all his fake attacks with a weapon from the angry fan

El Muffin · 08-16-2014, 01:36 PM

ok ..not really feeling either entry this time

ive seen both competitors with better shit

ydks had potential for humor..I like that u tied in the ringing bell with the hunchback of notre dame shit..cuz thats relevant..my only gripe is the flow /transition from setup to punch..syllables didnt match..results are a choppy line.

camp bell..urs was executed cleaner but unfortunately im totally unfamiliar with the reference..I googled angry fan but as I expected..it was entirely too vague..hopefully ppl will come in here n see ur line for what it really is.

apologies

that being said I have to give ydk the edge in this

ydk

sral · 08-18-2014, 11:49 AM

lmao i still dont think ive got what @Camp Bell was tryna do with his punch, complete miss to me on his part

@YDK actually had a decent nameplay and some humour to it

he got this

e11even · 08-19-2014, 12:30 AM

YDK this was cool. I think you're getting the hang of this(again?) It all didn't completely jibe, but it was still good.

Camp I don't know. Something tells me you dug too deep for a punch and completely lost the audience. In the hood we call that reaching lol. Kinda like what I do every round lol.

MVGT YDK for a better understood punch.

K Huntsman · 08-19-2014, 09:05 AM

Ydk had a harder punch IMO

V/YDK

Unfukwitable · 08-19-2014, 10:46 AM

YDK had a cool line couldve been worded a bit more crisp & I think I see what Camp tried to do with the Capital/Cap at all .. Angry fans type in caps? It just wasn't executed or delivered properly if im correct if not then im completely lost..

v/ YDK

Certain · 08-19-2014, 11:36 PM

YDK: I liked this for a roast. The wording should be tighter for a battle.

Camp Bell: I have no idea what your reference was to. Don't make voters use Google.

Vote: YDK

Destroyer · 08-20-2014, 12:06 PM

I'm assuming camp's is a Capitol wordplay...
that said, didn't really like either bar
ydk's had potential though

v/ydk

Meth · 08-20-2014, 07:53 PM

Who is angry fan

V/ydk

BROKE LESNAR · 08-20-2014, 11:00 PM

I spent alkt of time on thsi battle bc I dod t wanr tp shortc zhtenge anybod but I have to go wjth ydk bc h3 awesome and jt camp kind of swqyed in discussion...but after the sauwy I thoight hia bar was dopw

v-ydk

08-14-2014, 12:39 AM	#1
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489511	Camp Bell vs. YDK - YDK wins The 1-2 Punch League Due Monday Midnight Pacific @Camp Bell @YDK __________________ Crystal

08-14-2014, 07:30 AM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	check __________________

08-14-2014, 10:57 AM	#3
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	...yup. __________________ get high. write rhymes.

08-15-2014, 08:33 PM	#4
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Ima smash your head through the coffee table, somebody grab me a body bag Cuz ringing camp's bell is light work; you ole hunchback of the couch looking fag __________________

08-15-2014, 11:28 PM	#5
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	the 3 letter man lame, wack and wont blaze a can i'll cap at all his fake attacks with a weapon from the angry fan __________________ get high. write rhymes.

08-16-2014, 01:36 PM	#6
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	ok ..not really feeling either entry this time ive seen both competitors with better shit ydks had potential for humor..I like that u tied in the ringing bell with the hunchback of notre dame shit..cuz thats relevant..my only gripe is the flow /transition from setup to punch..syllables didnt match..results are a choppy line. camp bell..urs was executed cleaner but unfortunately im totally unfamiliar with the reference..I googled angry fan but as I expected..it was entirely too vague..hopefully ppl will come in here n see ur line for what it really is. apologies that being said I have to give ydk the edge in this ydk __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 08-17-2014 at 03:50 AM.

08-18-2014, 11:49 AM	#7
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	lmao i still dont think ive got what @Camp Bell was tryna do with his punch, complete miss to me on his part @YDK actually had a decent nameplay and some humour to it he got this __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-19-2014, 12:30 AM	#8
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	YDK this was cool. I think you're getting the hang of this(again?) It all didn't completely jibe, but it was still good. Camp I don't know. Something tells me you dug too deep for a punch and completely lost the audience. In the hood we call that reaching lol. Kinda like what I do every round lol. MVGT YDK for a better understood punch. __________________ Ahem.

08-19-2014, 09:05 AM	#9
K Huntsman Siberian Rocky Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 0	Ydk had a harder punch IMO V/YDK

08-19-2014, 10:46 AM	#10
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	YDK had a cool line couldve been worded a bit more crisp & I think I see what Camp tried to do with the Capital/Cap at all .. Angry fans type in caps? It just wasn't executed or delivered properly if im correct if not then im completely lost.. v/ YDK

08-19-2014, 11:36 PM	#11
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	YDK: I liked this for a roast. The wording should be tighter for a battle. Camp Bell: I have no idea what your reference was to. Don't make voters use Google. Vote: YDK __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-20-2014, 07:53 PM	#13
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489511	Who is angry fan V/ydk __________________ Crystal

08-20-2014, 11:00 PM	#14
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	I spent alkt of time on thsi battle bc I dod t wanr tp shortc zhtenge anybod but I have to go wjth ydk bc h3 awesome and jt camp kind of swqyed in discussion...but after the sauwy I thoight hia bar was dopw v-ydk