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Meth 08-14-2014 12:39 AM

Camp Bell vs. YDK - YDK wins
 
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@Camp Bell @YDK

YDK 08-14-2014 07:30 AM

check

Camp Bell 08-14-2014 10:57 AM

...yup.

YDK 08-15-2014 08:33 PM

Ima smash your head through the coffee table, somebody grab me a body bag
Cuz ringing camp's bell is light work; you ole hunchback of the couch looking fag

Camp Bell 08-15-2014 11:28 PM

the 3 letter man lame, wack and wont blaze a can
i'll cap at all his fake attacks with a weapon from the angry fan

El Muffin 08-16-2014 01:36 PM

ok ..not really feeling either entry this time

ive seen both competitors with better shit

ydks had potential for humor..I like that u tied in the ringing bell with the hunchback of notre dame shit..cuz thats relevant..my only gripe is the flow /transition from setup to punch..syllables didnt match..results are a choppy line.

camp bell..urs was executed cleaner but unfortunately im totally unfamiliar with the reference..I googled angry fan but as I expected..it was entirely too vague..hopefully ppl will come in here n see ur line for what it really is.

apologies

that being said I have to give ydk the edge in this

ydk

sral 08-18-2014 11:49 AM

lmao i still dont think ive got what @Camp Bell was tryna do with his punch, complete miss to me on his part

@YDK actually had a decent nameplay and some humour to it

he got this

e11even 08-19-2014 12:30 AM

YDK this was cool. I think you're getting the hang of this(again?) It all didn't completely jibe, but it was still good.

Camp I don't know. Something tells me you dug too deep for a punch and completely lost the audience. In the hood we call that reaching lol. Kinda like what I do every round lol.

MVGT YDK for a better understood punch.

K Huntsman 08-19-2014 09:05 AM

Ydk had a harder punch IMO

V/YDK

Unfukwitable 08-19-2014 10:46 AM

YDK had a cool line couldve been worded a bit more crisp & I think I see what Camp tried to do with the Capital/Cap at all .. Angry fans type in caps? It just wasn't executed or delivered properly if im correct if not then im completely lost..

v/ YDK

Certain 08-19-2014 11:36 PM

YDK: I liked this for a roast. The wording should be tighter for a battle.

Camp Bell: I have no idea what your reference was to. Don't make voters use Google.

Vote: YDK

Destroyer 08-20-2014 12:06 PM

I'm assuming camp's is a Capitol wordplay...
that said, didn't really like either bar
ydk's had potential though

v/ydk

Meth 08-20-2014 07:53 PM

Who is angry fan

V/ydk

BROKE LESNAR 08-20-2014 11:00 PM

I spent alkt of time on thsi battle bc I dod t wanr tp shortc zhtenge anybod but I have to go wjth ydk bc h3 awesome and jt camp kind of swqyed in discussion...but after the sauwy I thoight hia bar was dopw

v-ydk


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