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Camp Bell vs. YDK - YDK wins
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check
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...yup.
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Ima smash your head through the coffee table, somebody grab me a body bag
Cuz ringing camp's bell is light work; you ole hunchback of the couch looking fag |
the 3 letter man lame, wack and wont blaze a can
i'll cap at all his fake attacks with a weapon from the angry fan |
ok ..not really feeling either entry this time
ive seen both competitors with better shit ydks had potential for humor..I like that u tied in the ringing bell with the hunchback of notre dame shit..cuz thats relevant..my only gripe is the flow /transition from setup to punch..syllables didnt match..results are a choppy line. camp bell..urs was executed cleaner but unfortunately im totally unfamiliar with the reference..I googled angry fan but as I expected..it was entirely too vague..hopefully ppl will come in here n see ur line for what it really is. apologies that being said I have to give ydk the edge in this ydk |
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YDK this was cool. I think you're getting the hang of this(again?) It all didn't completely jibe, but it was still good.
Camp I don't know. Something tells me you dug too deep for a punch and completely lost the audience. In the hood we call that reaching lol. Kinda like what I do every round lol. MVGT YDK for a better understood punch. |
Ydk had a harder punch IMO
V/YDK |
YDK had a cool line couldve been worded a bit more crisp & I think I see what Camp tried to do with the Capital/Cap at all .. Angry fans type in caps? It just wasn't executed or delivered properly if im correct if not then im completely lost..
v/ YDK |
YDK: I liked this for a roast. The wording should be tighter for a battle.
Camp Bell: I have no idea what your reference was to. Don't make voters use Google. Vote: YDK |
I'm assuming camp's is a Capitol wordplay...
that said, didn't really like either bar ydk's had potential though v/ydk |
Who is angry fan
V/ydk |
I spent alkt of time on thsi battle bc I dod t wanr tp shortc zhtenge anybod but I have to go wjth ydk bc h3 awesome and jt camp kind of swqyed in discussion...but after the sauwy I thoight hia bar was dopw
v-ydk |
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