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I lost my mojo, needed it back, so I dropped a boatload recently and what d’ya know you – Freedom at last! I broke the monotony, shattered the image, since most of them copy me after I’ve finished. It’s total hypocrisy the fact that they’re dissing my flow and philosophy when that’s what they mimic! I’ve had it with bitches always stealing my steez and I’ll gladly admit it, none realer than me. What’s sad is these infants all happily pillaged the baddest with writtens and weren’t decent at least. They see I’m a beast with what they’re so-so at, read it and weep cause my flows dope as & that’s reason for me to get my mojo back…
My mojos been missing for seconds to minutes from hours to days, I reckon the linguistical spirits laid down there words so concepts evade, my mind all the time, I have some words that don't rhyme, so I stretch an I reach and commit lyrical crimes, absorbing others heat like a leech - the line of respect has been breached, an if we were to meet - id bash your head open an steal the thoughts that come out, christ watch what you say..... ill steal your words straight from your mouth I seek for my own lines in my mind and I scream for release, my mojo a beast that is bleeding a painful death without peace, my mind locked in a vice but if I ever break free and emerge and see yall all be in an emergency yall be wishing you never heard of me yo bitch its me stealing ya steez @Flo Real Last edited by Brian Bryan; 07-10-2013 at 03:43 AM. |
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I meant to lay that out the same as yours my bad
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Up feed will be returned
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Verse 1 was tight as fuck
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haha classic lars verse. love them always. so so dope. Flo i hate to say but i don't feel like u kept up with BB on this one. his shit was hella complex where urs was a little simple. so for me it didn't work too great as a collabo besides you both writing about finding ur mojo
should post more writing in this section bros, hit up the 2013 cypher |
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good looking out bruh!
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@CopyPat we did drop 3 verses of pure fire but no one got off there arse and fed it
Mine was wrote extremely quickly so I can take the crit ;) nice looks |
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lmao not even kidding but Bryan wrote his up on his phone while his girl was at the bar ordering the round
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@Lars got something to send you - see if its something you can work with - might not be your style, might be totally up your street - we shall see
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yeah bruh send me that good shizz
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@Brian Bryan don't think split eight would want me to lmao
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I'M HERE
PM BOX EMPTIED LETS GOOOOOO!
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Flo you came alright. I have to agree with Pat though, you were a few notches short of being on par with what Lars brought. Still a good effort from both. Keep doing you |
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Flo has nothing to gain by collabing with.lars....lol
Hes just getting outshined.....badly It makes flos verse seem even worse then it really is in comparison to having seen how good lars shit is lol If u getting writing tips from the homie lars tho thats worth it in itself....dude is a wealth of writing knowledge and still drops continuously dope even in his lackadaisical stage of text poeming. |
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@Bags This is a lacklustre verse from me - agreed
I wouldn't say the same for some of our others however plus collabing with someone as good as lars usually means keeping up with him which helps me keep motivated
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