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Brian Bryan 07-09-2013 10:22 AM

"Finding Mojo" Feat Flo Real
 
I lost my mojo, needed it back, so I dropped a boatload recently and what d’ya know you – Freedom at last! I broke the monotony, shattered the image, since most of them copy me after I’ve finished. It’s total hypocrisy the fact that they’re dissing my flow and philosophy when that’s what they mimic! I’ve had it with bitches always stealing my steez and I’ll gladly admit it, none realer than me. What’s sad is these infants all happily pillaged the baddest with writtens and weren’t decent at least. They see I’m a beast with what they’re so-so at, read it and weep cause my flows dope as & that’s reason for me to get my mojo back…

My mojos been missing for seconds to minutes from hours to days, I reckon the linguistical spirits laid down there words so concepts evade, my mind all the time, I have some words that don't rhyme, so I stretch an I reach and commit lyrical crimes, absorbing others heat like a leech - the line of respect
has been breached, an if we were to meet - id bash your head open an steal the thoughts that come out, christ watch what you say..... ill steal your words straight from your mouth I seek for my own lines in my mind and I scream for release, my mojo a beast that is bleeding a painful death without peace, my mind locked in a vice but if I ever break free and emerge and see yall all be in an emergency yall be wishing you never heard of me yo bitch its me stealing ya steez

@Flo Real

Flow 07-09-2013 10:41 AM

I meant to lay that out the same as yours my bad

Flow 07-10-2013 04:07 PM

Up feed will be returned

Split 07-10-2013 04:14 PM

Verse 1 was tight as fuck

CopyPat 07-11-2013 12:17 AM

haha classic lars verse. love them always. so so dope. Flo i hate to say but i don't feel like u kept up with BB on this one. his shit was hella complex where urs was a little simple. so for me it didn't work too great as a collabo besides you both writing about finding ur mojo

should post more writing in this section bros, hit up the 2013 cypher

Lars 07-11-2013 03:33 AM

good looking out bruh!

Flow 07-11-2013 04:06 AM

@CopyPat we did drop 3 verses of pure fire but no one got off there arse and fed it


Mine was wrote extremely quickly so I can take the crit ;) nice looks

Lars 07-11-2013 07:56 AM

lmao not even kidding but Bryan wrote his up on his phone while his girl was at the bar ordering the round

Flow 07-11-2013 08:05 AM

@Lars got something to send you - see if its something you can work with - might not be your style, might be totally up your street - we shall see

Brian Bryan 07-11-2013 09:23 AM

yeah bruh send me that good shizz

Flow 07-11-2013 09:24 AM

@Brian Bryan don't think split eight would want me to lmao

Lars 07-11-2013 09:53 AM

I'M HERE

PM BOX EMPTIED

LETS GOOOOOO!

Vulgar 07-11-2013 08:31 PM

Quote:

I broke the monotony, shattered the image, since most of them copy me after I’ve finished. It’s total hypocrisy the fact that they’re dissing my flow and philosophy when that’s what they mimic!
was melodious.

Flo you came alright. I have to agree with Pat though, you were a few notches short of being on par with what Lars brought. Still a good effort from both.

Keep doing you

Ghost1 07-11-2013 11:23 PM

Flo has nothing to gain by collabing with.lars....lol

Hes just getting outshined.....badly

It makes flos verse seem even worse then it really is in comparison to having seen how good lars shit is lol

If u getting writing tips from the homie lars tho thats worth it in itself....dude is a wealth of writing knowledge and still drops continuously dope even in his lackadaisical stage of text poeming.

Flow 07-12-2013 09:45 AM

@Bags This is a lacklustre verse from me - agreed
I wouldn't say the same for some of our others however
plus collabing with someone as good as lars usually means keeping up with him which helps me keep motivated


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