Out from Hibernation - site diss

oats · 06-29-2013, 08:34 PM

break's done. Oats back to toe-tag, flow stacked as they come
Know that, my real life's as awesome as Rawn's fake ones
GOW you ain't safe son, this special ed teacher leave you raped from a key
see - teaching that retard a lesson is second nature to me
the greatest to speak, Bags dumbass better stay locked at home
I'd blast his brains across the pavement…but it would barely cover a cobblestone
He's not alone, Detour can tantrum at his dojo but it aint no help
so bow for your sensei…he's behind you with your promotion to rainbow belt
you know the saying, you're the type of pussy to sink ships
getting more emotional over fake accomplishments than Rawn ducking pink slips
let me bring Sik back to reality, I'ma outsmart and smoke this scrub
if I was ever Sik wit it - I'd be too dense to know how much of a joke I was
follow your dream and be a rapper, consider this that start
cuz everyone hopes Sik'll sell…will clog your bitchass heart
Nik is a joke, always crying over losses in the battle league
Billy12 pretended to be a bitch, but to you it just comes naturally
Congrats on your elevation though, you been takin incredible steps
From a nobody on the old board to mid-tier once all the veterans left
Fuck all of Netcees 2.0, all your faggotry is infinite
Such a site of worthless pussies y'all make RIA look legitimate

Mike Wrecka · 06-29-2013, 10:26 PM

dope

Geno · 06-30-2013, 02:39 PM

word, this was fire oats, read it over the weekend, but i had a crazy good time of a weekend and really didnt get to involved with responses or posting. this shit was nuts though, shoulda made it longer fam..

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Void · 06-30-2013, 02:52 PM

Short and sweet. Simple. Dope.

StarFaggot · 06-30-2013, 02:57 PM

the greatest to speak, Bags dumbass better stay locked at home
I'd blast his brains across the pavement…but it would barely cover a cobblestone

nice

Fuck all of Netcees 2.0, all your faggotry is infinite
Such a site of worthless pussies y'all make RIA look legitimate

harsh

This was nice and simple. Flow was on point. You must dislike Rawn lol

oats · 06-30-2013, 03:13 PM

I thought there was a 20 line limit. Thanks for the feed people.

Vulgar · 07-03-2013, 12:44 AM

He's not alone, Detour can tantrum at his dojo but it aint no help
so bow for your sensei…he's behind you with your promotion to rainbow belt
^lol I liked the set up. First line is hilarious.

follow your dream and be a rapper, consider this that start
cuz everyone hopes Sik'll sell…will clog your bitchass heart
^Grimy.

Overall this was a cool diss.

Just Write · 07-03-2013, 11:03 AM

this has to be one of the better site disses ive read man. almost makes me want to "attempt" to write one but i don't think i'm relative enough to be taken serious... yet lol. but yea man props, real rugged type feel. that last bar was crucial, so fuck you too. peace

CopyPat · 07-03-2013, 01:28 PM

hahaha nice. some really clever wordplays/punches. was weird seeing YOU do a verse like this. u pulled it off like ur a seasoned battle vet tho haha. good stuff, was an entertaining and smooth read. sikk'll sell was the standout for me, nice one

06-29-2013, 08:34 PM	#1
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	Out from Hibernation - site diss break's done. Oats back to toe-tag, flow stacked as they come Know that, my real life's as awesome as Rawn's fake ones GOW you ain't safe son, this special ed teacher leave you raped from a key see - teaching that retard a lesson is second nature to me the greatest to speak, Bags dumbass better stay locked at home I'd blast his brains across the pavement…but it would barely cover a cobblestone He's not alone, Detour can tantrum at his dojo but it aint no help so bow for your sensei…he's behind you with your promotion to rainbow belt you know the saying, you're the type of pussy to sink ships getting more emotional over fake accomplishments than Rawn ducking pink slips let me bring Sik back to reality, I'ma outsmart and smoke this scrub if I was ever Sik wit it - I'd be too dense to know how much of a joke I was follow your dream and be a rapper, consider this that start cuz everyone hopes Sik'll sell…will clog your bitchass heart Nik is a joke, always crying over losses in the battle league Billy12 pretended to be a bitch, but to you it just comes naturally Congrats on your elevation though, you been takin incredible steps From a nobody on the old board to mid-tier once all the veterans left Fuck all of Netcees 2.0, all your faggotry is infinite Such a site of worthless pussies y'all make RIA look legitimate

06-29-2013, 10:26 PM	#2
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	dope __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

06-30-2013, 02:39 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	word, this was fire oats, read it over the weekend, but i had a crazy good time of a weekend and really didnt get to involved with responses or posting. this shit was nuts though, shoulda made it longer fam.. up __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-30-2013, 02:57 PM	#5
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	the greatest to speak, Bags dumbass better stay locked at home I'd blast his brains across the pavement…but it would barely cover a cobblestone nice Fuck all of Netcees 2.0, all your faggotry is infinite Such a site of worthless pussies y'all make RIA look legitimate harsh This was nice and simple. Flow was on point. You must dislike Rawn lol __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

07-03-2013, 11:03 AM	#8
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	this has to be one of the better site disses ive read man. almost makes me want to "attempt" to write one but i don't think i'm relative enough to be taken serious... yet lol. but yea man props, real rugged type feel. that last bar was crucial, so fuck you too. peace __________________

06-30-2013, 02:52 PM	#4
Void Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Rep Power: 0	Short and sweet. Simple. Dope.

06-30-2013, 03:13 PM	#6
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	I thought there was a 20 line limit. Thanks for the feed people.

07-03-2013, 12:44 AM	#7
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	He's not alone, Detour can tantrum at his dojo but it aint no help so bow for your sensei…he's behind you with your promotion to rainbow belt ^lol I liked the set up. First line is hilarious. follow your dream and be a rapper, consider this that start cuz everyone hopes Sik'll sell…will clog your bitchass heart ^Grimy. Overall this was a cool diss.

07-03-2013, 01:28 PM	#9
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahaha nice. some really clever wordplays/punches. was weird seeing YOU do a verse like this. u pulled it off like ur a seasoned battle vet tho haha. good stuff, was an entertaining and smooth read. sikk'll sell was the standout for me, nice one