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oats 06-29-2013 08:34 PM

Out from Hibernation - site diss
 
break's done. Oats back to toe-tag, flow stacked as they come
Know that, my real life's as awesome as Rawn's fake ones
GOW you ain't safe son, this special ed teacher leave you raped from a key
see - teaching that retard a lesson is second nature to me
the greatest to speak, Bags dumbass better stay locked at home
I'd blast his brains across the pavement…but it would barely cover a cobblestone
He's not alone, Detour can tantrum at his dojo but it aint no help
so bow for your sensei…he's behind you with your promotion to rainbow belt
you know the saying, you're the type of pussy to sink ships
getting more emotional over fake accomplishments than Rawn ducking pink slips
let me bring Sik back to reality, I'ma outsmart and smoke this scrub
if I was ever Sik wit it - I'd be too dense to know how much of a joke I was
follow your dream and be a rapper, consider this that start
cuz everyone hopes Sik'll sell…will clog your bitchass heart
Nik is a joke, always crying over losses in the battle league
Billy12 pretended to be a bitch, but to you it just comes naturally
Congrats on your elevation though, you been takin incredible steps
From a nobody on the old board to mid-tier once all the veterans left
Fuck all of Netcees 2.0, all your faggotry is infinite
Such a site of worthless pussies y'all make RIA look legitimate

Mike Wrecka 06-29-2013 10:26 PM

dope

Geno 06-30-2013 02:39 PM

word, this was fire oats, read it over the weekend, but i had a crazy good time of a weekend and really didnt get to involved with responses or posting. this shit was nuts though, shoulda made it longer fam..

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Void 06-30-2013 02:52 PM

Short and sweet. Simple. Dope.

StarFaggot 06-30-2013 02:57 PM

the greatest to speak, Bags dumbass better stay locked at home
I'd blast his brains across the pavement…but it would barely cover a cobblestone

nice

Fuck all of Netcees 2.0, all your faggotry is infinite
Such a site of worthless pussies y'all make RIA look legitimate

harsh


This was nice and simple. Flow was on point. You must dislike Rawn lol

oats 06-30-2013 03:13 PM

I thought there was a 20 line limit. Thanks for the feed people.

Vulgar 07-03-2013 12:44 AM

He's not alone, Detour can tantrum at his dojo but it aint no help
so bow for your sensei…he's behind you with your promotion to rainbow belt
^lol I liked the set up. First line is hilarious.

follow your dream and be a rapper, consider this that start
cuz everyone hopes Sik'll sell…will clog your bitchass heart
^Grimy.

Overall this was a cool diss.

Just Write 07-03-2013 11:03 AM

this has to be one of the better site disses ive read man. almost makes me want to "attempt" to write one but i don't think i'm relative enough to be taken serious... yet lol. but yea man props, real rugged type feel. that last bar was crucial, so fuck you too. peace

CopyPat 07-03-2013 01:28 PM

hahaha nice. some really clever wordplays/punches. was weird seeing YOU do a verse like this. u pulled it off like ur a seasoned battle vet tho haha. good stuff, was an entertaining and smooth read. sikk'll sell was the standout for me, nice one


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