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AUSTRALOWPITHYKESS-POSTAUMORTOPHILORPHIS: TOTORO
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The year 57 A.M.F. By Roman calendars it's twenty-two fourteen After Man's Fall...I rule the Earth. Drug fueled, a Newport King. Cyborg Columbia Grad, C.E.O. mutant technology/State fiend I sniff a line of this metallic gray coke, and drift into a daydream: Death's a facade. it's night vision penetrating the misty depths of a fog. Disciplinarian, laissez-faire; a lesson from God Prometheus deranged - unites...Nebudchadnezzar with Log??!? No se puede vivir sin amar. Wine and pasta, enjoy. mutual first date. RIIIING *mumble grumble.* she said "LA CASA" annoyed Buzz cut blind, a pillar of strength: it's Solomon's ploy indoctrinated liberal hippies verse autonomous joy He's a jerk. She's a nympho acting laudably coy Evolution's so hypocritical and possibly void... evolution's so critical and Santa Clauses me toys :) dissolution's subliminal, that's what it costs to rejoice ...incompatible grown men is what it costs to be boys mutual funds and stock growth. Hotel Grapefruit serrated the spoon oooowwcinayesuuuhaiiiiEYEluh...luh...LUVVV YOUUU: he's serenading the moon homeless savant turned corporate exec painted buffoon. Your LORD - East of Eden, meet the heathen who God saved Cain's murderous rage birthing daughters from Pompeii original...what? The screaming clay visage of God's face. Most of humanity erased; I guess I have the taste of an odd geek It's why I take massive drugs, fuck cyber whores and chug Knob Creek Call me Juan Don Sheik - Chillin' with Mad Max and canned dog meat everything repeats. At the apex of a black citadel's monolithic facade Undulating...the epochs of change, the rhythms of God Intensify your thoughts beyond this violet prism of thought a Palestinian fallen, living under this fleeting prison of Saul. .
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04-10-2014, 03:47 PM
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04-10-2014, 08:30 PM
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lol most of this was dope but the incredibly corny lines took away from it like that santa clause line rofl
it's night vision penetrating the misty depths of a fog. Disciplinarian, laissez-faire; a lesson from God dope rtf if you want: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=63323 |
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04-10-2014, 08:35 PM
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I thought this was very dope, NYC. Scattered thoughts and references, religious/philosophical, a shot of braggadocio off kilter type shit. I love it. First time reading something of this nature from you outside of topical or conceptually based. Not one of your cleaner drops scheme wise but the content was plentiful. Good stuff homie.
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04-10-2014, 08:43 PM
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Aye thanks my nigga
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