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NYCSPITZ 04-10-2014 02:57 PM

AUSTRALOWPITHYKESS-POSTAUMORTOPHILORPHIS: TOTORO
 
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The year 57 A.M.F. By Roman calendars it's twenty-two fourteen
After Man's Fall...I rule the Earth. Drug fueled, a Newport King.
Cyborg Columbia Grad, C.E.O. mutant technology/State fiend
I sniff a line of this metallic gray coke, and drift into a daydream:
Death's a facade.
it's night vision penetrating the misty depths of a fog.
Disciplinarian, laissez-faire; a lesson from God
Prometheus deranged - unites...Nebudchadnezzar with Log??!?
No se puede vivir sin amar. Wine and pasta, enjoy.
mutual first date. RIIIING *mumble grumble.* she said "LA CASA" annoyed
Buzz cut blind, a pillar of strength: it's Solomon's ploy
indoctrinated liberal hippies verse autonomous joy
He's a jerk. She's a nympho acting laudably coy
Evolution's so hypocritical and possibly void...
evolution's so critical and Santa Clauses me toys :)
dissolution's subliminal, that's what it costs to rejoice
...incompatible grown men is what it costs to be boys
mutual funds and stock growth. Hotel Grapefruit serrated the spoon
oooowwcinayesuuuhaiiiiEYEluh...luh...LUVVV YOUUU: he's serenading the moon
homeless savant turned corporate exec painted buffoon. Your LORD -
East of Eden, meet the heathen who God saved
Cain's murderous rage birthing daughters from Pompeii
original...what? The screaming clay visage of God's face.
Most of humanity erased; I guess I have the taste of an odd geek
It's why I take massive drugs, fuck cyber whores and chug Knob Creek
Call me Juan Don Sheik - Chillin' with Mad Max and canned dog meat
everything repeats. At the apex of a black citadel's monolithic facade
Undulating...the epochs of change, the rhythms of God
Intensify your thoughts beyond this violet prism of thought
a Palestinian fallen, living under this fleeting prison of Saul.


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NYCSPITZ 04-10-2014 03:47 PM

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=64846

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=63921

Paradigm 04-10-2014 08:30 PM

lol most of this was dope but the incredibly corny lines took away from it like that santa clause line rofl


it's night vision penetrating the misty depths of a fog.
Disciplinarian, laissez-faire; a lesson from God

dope

rtf if you want: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=63323

King Ra. 04-10-2014 08:35 PM

I thought this was very dope, NYC. Scattered thoughts and references, religious/philosophical, a shot of braggadocio off kilter type shit. I love it. First time reading something of this nature from you outside of topical or conceptually based. Not one of your cleaner drops scheme wise but the content was plentiful. Good stuff homie.

NYCSPITZ 04-10-2014 08:43 PM

Aye thanks my nigga


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