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05-01-2013, 11:16 PM
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Fuck em
http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/17151204#
I'm the first verse...be critic my first real audio so ya know |
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05-01-2013, 11:42 PM
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No offense, I don't think you have a voice for rap.. enunciate syllables more, not the worst first verse I heard. Didn't like lyrics much but thanks for not just reading a topical, hate that shit
Your delivery needs most work. Start smoking cigs or something too
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05-02-2013, 12:36 AM
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What does amoking have to do with anything? And u are the first person to tell me I don't have the voice for it...
Thanks tho |
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05-02-2013, 12:39 AM
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You need more of a presence on the mic...
sounds like you are just reading from the page the flow needs a little work, putting it to a beat is hard but once you find how to make it work, its all worth while otherwise, I'd say this wasn't too bad...reminds me of some dipset type of record |
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05-02-2013, 12:41 AM
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Thanks mr j.. Problem is I hate my voice but everyone likes it..I have no confidence in myself and he put an effect on it that I don't like...
Just a rough draft...beat hasn't even been bought yet just seeing what feed we get and if people like it... I appreciate any feed |
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05-02-2013, 12:44 AM
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The voice isn't bothering at all...
just needs to feel like you want to be spitting on the mic you'll figure it out with more time |
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05-02-2013, 12:49 AM
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I gotcha man...preciate it btw I rtfd
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