Fuck em
 

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/17151204#

I'm the first verse...be critic my first real audio so ya know

No offense, I don't think you have a voice for rap.. enunciate syllables more, not the worst first verse I heard. Didn't like lyrics much but thanks for not just reading a topical, hate that shit

Your delivery needs most work. Start smoking cigs or something too

What does amoking have to do with anything? And u are the first person to tell me I don't have the voice for it...

Thanks tho

You need more of a presence on the mic...
sounds like you are just reading from the page
the flow needs a little work, putting it to a beat is hard
but once you find how to make it work, its all worth while
otherwise, I'd say this wasn't too bad...reminds me of some dipset type of record

Thanks mr j.. Problem is I hate my voice but everyone likes it..I have no confidence in myself and he put an effect on it that I don't like...
Just a rough draft...beat hasn't even been bought yet just seeing what feed we get and if people like it...

I appreciate any feed

The voice isn't bothering at all...
just needs to feel like you want to be spitting on the mic
you'll figure it out with more time

I gotcha man...preciate it btw I rtfd