short bullshit

YDK · 03-15-2014, 04:30 AM

Breathless at breakfast, a lump in my throat
a blunt that i smoked reminds me of something i wrote.
I remember the feeling without words, nothing but hope,
But as soon as i awoke i realized i was becoming a joke.
My dreams are surreal and vivid beyond imagination,
Of being successful and capturing every aspiration.
"It's all just an aberration; face it David,
You'll always be underrated in the eyes of the sated!
Meaningless accomplishments, you know that you're fated,
To fail when it matters until you too are jaded!"
Yet I've never fallen, never quit, i keep thriving,
Never stalling, taken hits, but still surviving.
I'm a man of my word that demands to be heard,
Plagued by insanity that only agony cured.
As i brace for my fantasy to finally take place,
I'm again disappointed; I cry with a straight face.
Giving away my pride and freedom, I was willing and able;
So the day I lost my voice,
was the day i signed with a label.

Coup · 03-15-2014, 05:35 AM

Breathless at breakfast, a lump in my throat
a blunt that i smoked reminds me of something i wrote.
I remember the feeling without words, nothing but hope,

dope lines

wanted to switch nothing but hope with "noticing the choke"

03-15-2014, 04:30 AM	#1
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	short bullshit Breathless at breakfast, a lump in my throat a blunt that i smoked reminds me of something i wrote. I remember the feeling without words, nothing but hope, But as soon as i awoke i realized i was becoming a joke. My dreams are surreal and vivid beyond imagination, Of being successful and capturing every aspiration. "It's all just an aberration; face it David, You'll always be underrated in the eyes of the sated! Meaningless accomplishments, you know that you're fated, To fail when it matters until you too are jaded!" Yet I've never fallen, never quit, i keep thriving, Never stalling, taken hits, but still surviving. I'm a man of my word that demands to be heard, Plagued by insanity that only agony cured. As i brace for my fantasy to finally take place, I'm again disappointed; I cry with a straight face. Giving away my pride and freedom, I was willing and able; So the day I lost my voice, was the day i signed with a label. __________________

03-15-2014, 05:35 AM	#2
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	Breathless at breakfast, a lump in my throat a blunt that i smoked reminds me of something i wrote. I remember the feeling without words, nothing but hope, dope lines wanted to switch nothing but hope with "noticing the choke"