Championship: Dominate vs. non azn Bob {Dominate wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

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@Dominate @non azn Bob

[Orc]

WHAT UP...20-24??? YOU CAN USE 3 AZN JOKES I'LL USE 3 AUSTRALIANS JOKES.. WE ALL SQUARE

[Dominate]

Lmao

Tell me something about yourself besides that you are non azn. Otherwise 16 max tbh

[Orc]

EXTENZIONNN

[~RustyGunZ~]

Dominates verse

Keep fronting u ain't from Chinatown. You'll take this L & ur life will spiral down
Facing me is a Slippery Slope, Pussy.. & that's what ur Mother gets when I'm around
In crews I'm crowned as master, I show em how to massacre chumps
I turn news to top heads, while any crew that Bobsled went Downhill faster than one
Plus when my girl sings Ashanti, it reminds me of Angels in choirs n shit
When your girl sings A Shanty it's more like an Ol' Sea Wench on a Pirate Ship
& when you askin for sex, she's fantasizing & imagining a gat to ya head
That bitch ain't giving Bobtail... She rather fuck with the Rabbit instead
Ill leave this faggot for dead... His drop in rank will be off the pages
This Nipple Slip soooo bad a Wardrobe Malfunction will NOT explain it
So quit denying - dawg u Asian.. & no one gon hype those drops
You need to accept you're a Yellow Man... And at best you're a Sideshow Bob

non azn Bobs verse

I laugh so hard atcha corny bars, + ya opponents do be hurting
Everytime he writes theyre *deaaaad*. Dom could star in Death Note the Movie version/
Damn D. judging dudes w/ no pics led to an eventual backfire
U got Fail Threads that make ill nik-A's Sportswear seem like Gentlemans attire/
U been txtn for 10yrs, BARELY beat Sharp & were dire at Netcees
They say 'if ya can't do, Teach'.. & u must Sub at the Centre for Aspiring Textcees/
I can't live without the Principle: drop dope and then party
U can't live without the Principal. If he fires ya ass u'll be Homeless & starving/
In this batt- u gotta Bitzreig swag cuz u hopeless w/ wording
& U Bombing w/o warning proves the Title aint the ONLY thing u stole froma German/
I'm ballllllling out ripping fools. Bob got bitches who got riches too
It's ironic u dont even got Commonwealth, & ya country is STILL under British Rule/

[Untold]

In crews I'm crowned as master, I show em how to massacre chumps
I turn news to top heads, while any crew that Bobsled went Downhill faster than one
& when you askin for sex, she's fantasizing & imagining a gat to ya head
That bitch ain't giving Bobtail... She rather fuck with the Rabbit instead
So quit denying - dawg u Asian.. & no one gon hype those drops
You need to accept you're a Yellow Man... And at best you're a Sideshow Bob

vs.

Damn D. judging dudes w/ no pics led to an eventual backfire
U got Fail Threads that make ill nik-A's Sportswear seem like Gentlemans attire/
U been txtn for 10yrs, BARELY beat Sharp & were dire at Netcees
They say 'if ya can't do, Teach'.. & u must Sub at the Centre for Aspiring Textcees

not a bad battle here. gotta say tho, Dom stayed pretty consistent from start to finish. i didn't quote his opener, but it wasn't bad. just wasn't my fav. and the rest of his verse was definitely up to standards. i was diggin it for the most part. but Bob's verse seemed pretty rushed and wasn't my fav this week. the concepts that i quoted were cool but the wording just fell a bit short this week. maybe i didn't read it to good, but i feel that Bob could do better. esepcially what he dropped last week. dope battle tho.

v/ Dominate

[Sharp]

In crews I'm crowned as master, I show em how to massacre chumps
I turn news to top heads, while any crew that Bobsled went Downhill faster than one
Ill leave this faggot for dead... His drop in rank will be off the pages
This Nipple Slip soooo bad a Wardrobe Malfunction will NOT explain it
So quit denying - dawg u Asian.. & no one gon hype those drops
You need to accept you're a Yellow Man... And at best you're a Sideshow Bob


Damn D. judging dudes w/ no pics led to an eventual backfire
U got Fail Threads that make ill nik-A's Sportswear seem like Gentlemans attire/
I can't live without the Principle: drop dope and then party
U can't live without the Principal. If he fires ya ass u'll be Homeless & starving/
In this batt- u gotta Bitzreig swag cuz u hopeless w/ wording
& U Bombing w/o warning proves the Title aint the ONLY thing u stole froma German/


This is a tough one to vote on, had it go back an forth in my head a few times but i have to give the edge to Bob personally. I feel like his concepts were able to hit harder despite Dom's cleaner wording. Maybe its just preference, but I found Bob to be that much more effective. Good stuff guys

V/ Bob

[Cashius]

Dom- Some cool concepts but I thought the execution was lackluster...

i.e. Bobtail, Bobsled, Sideshow Bob...I think they could've been done better. I liked the opener, tho.

Bob- Seen the "dead" thing too much. Principal was ok. Commonwealth was good too.

So, I got one quote from Dom for the slippery slope thing and one and a half quotes from Bob for the commonwealth and principal. So, bob takes it.

Bob.

[Undead.]

In crews I'm crowned as master, I show em how to massacre chumps
I turn news to top heads, while any crew that Bobsled went Downhill faster than one
Ill leave this faggot for dead... His drop in rank will be off the pages
This Nipple Slip soooo bad a Wardrobe Malfunction will NOT explain it
So quit denying - dawg u Asian.. & no one gon hype those drops
You need to accept you're a Yellow Man... And at best you're a Sideshow Bob

vs.

Damn D. judging dudes w/ no pics led to an eventual backfire
U got Fail Threads that make ill nik-A's Sportswear seem like Gentlemans attire/
I can't live without the Principle: drop dope and then party
U can't live without the Principal. If he fires ya ass u'll be Homeless & starving/
In this batt- u gotta Bitzreig swag cuz u hopeless w/ wording
& U Bombing w/o warning proves the Title aint the ONLY thing u stole froma German/

I feel like DOm did have cleaner wording, but he didn't have the harder hits. This was a close one, i feel as if The Non-Azn edge it with harder lands. This was a very entertaining battle, good shit lads.

[Flow]

I got Dom taking this with an overall more polished verse and consisted hits. Bob had some harder hitting bars but had worse misses for me an that's why Dom
Edged it, great battle none the less. Probs got bob with lotb on aspiring textcees / that shit wasn't the greatest but it tickled me

Vote Dom

[megatron]

In crews I'm crowned as master, I show em how to massacre chumps
I turn news to top heads, while any crew that Bobsled went Downhill faster than one
So quit denying - dawg u Asian.. & no one gon hype those drops
You need to accept you're a Yellow Man... And at best you're a Sideshow Bob

vs

U been txtn for 10yrs, BARELY beat Sharp & were dire at Netcees
They say 'if ya can't do, Teach'.. & u must Sub at the Centre for Aspiring Textcees/
I can't live without the Principle: drop dope and then party
U can't live without the Principal. If he fires ya ass u'll be Homeless & starving/

imma go with Dom in this one..better verse.. I feel like the opener was okay..the ashanti concept was creative even tho i didn't like how it came together.. but in bobs verse I don't think it was as consistent I didn't real feel any of the other lines that weren't quoted

[Utmost]

Dominates verse

Keep fronting u ain't from Chinatown. You'll take this L & ur life will spiral down
Facing me is a Slippery Slope, Pussy.. & that's what ur Mother gets when I'm around
In crews I'm crowned as master, I show em how to massacre chumps
I turn news to top heads, while any crew that Bobsled went Downhill faster than one
So quit denying - dawg u Asian.. & no one gon hype those drops
You need to accept you're a Yellow Man... And at best you're a Sideshow Bob

non azn Bobs verse



U been txtn for 10yrs, BARELY beat Sharp & were dire at Netcees
They say 'if ya can't do, Teach'.. & u must Sub at the Centre for Aspiring Textcees/
I can't live without the Principle: drop dope and then party
U can't live without the Principal. If he fires ya ass u'll be Homeless & starving/
I'm ballllllling out ripping fools. Bob got bitches who got riches too
It's ironic u dont even got Commonwealth, & ya country is STILL under British Rule/



very close batt here, had re-read it couple times to make a decision. Bob started off eh to me,Didnt like the opener and the followup but once he got goin with the personals he was on hit. At times i felt like there was an extra word that threw off the flow. Dom spread out his non quotes at bit better, they werent right off the bat. didnt like ashanti i dunno but the rest was good. From both battlers i thought execution wasnt as sharp as what im used to seein. so with that said

v/Dom barely with a just touch more consistency

[Def_fuckin_5]

Dominate:

Bobsled
Pirate ship
bobtail



Bob:

Gentlemen's attire
principle

vote=Dom...entertaining match

[~RustyGunZ~]

5-3 Dominate

Would enjoy this getting to 7 votes for a winner

[bleak]

Slip Slope, Bobsled, Bobtail, sideshow Bob

vs.

Aspiring textcees, Principle

Not very lenient, I thought Bob could have come a lil harder considering what he did last week. DOm came consistent and correct, which took it from Bob.

Closer than quotes say, but Dom got this one