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When I get to Heaven
When I get to heaven I'll sing the wondrous of love of God,
When I get to I'll sing his mercy. When I get to Heaven I'll sing his grace, He'll prepare a place for me. When I get to Heaven a day of rejoicing will be, When I get to Heaven I'll see God. When I get to Heaven I'll shout for Victory! When I get to Heaven I'll praise the Lord, When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher. |
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06-08-2013, 04:55 PM
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delivery reminds me of
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06-08-2013, 07:55 PM
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I'mma start writing more & longer lines, I'm an amazing writer... thanks for reading guys.
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06-08-2013, 07:57 PM
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Wow this was amazing, this deeply touched my soul. Thank you for sharing.
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06-08-2013, 08:30 PM
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When I get to Heaven I'll see God.
^My fav line of your poem. Holy fuck, this was some incredible piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
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So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o |
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06-08-2013, 08:40 PM
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Stand behind me Satan!
I was liking this, believing you were sincerely praising and offering up humble love to Elohim of the heavens... That is until I read your last line of course. Make no mistake, you are baring a deceptive false light. When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher. Reference: 2 Corinthians 11:14 Revelations 12:9 And... Isaiah 14:12-14 12How art thou fallen from heaven, O Lucifer, son of the morning! how art thou cut down to the ground, which didst weaken the nations! 13For thou hast said in thine heart, I will ascend into heaven, I will exalt my throne above the stars of Elohim: I will sit also upon the mount of the congregation, in the sides of the north: 14I will ascend above the heights of the clouds; I will be like the most High. Consider this a critique. Or your last line When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher. Can mean to praise even harder and worship more. Hard to tell. Otherwise this is a well thought out piece and is subtle in its softness. Good drop.
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What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope. Last edited by Coup; 06-08-2013 at 09:46 PM. |
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06-08-2013, 09:56 PM
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Do you have autism why wont you respond me you handicapped bitch
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06-08-2013, 10:23 PM
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cool poem type thing..
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06-08-2013, 10:46 PM
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Don't be replying to my things with unnecessary questions, & thanks guys!
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06-09-2013, 05:37 AM
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Love ya girl, wanna write a hook for an upcoming collab I have???
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06-09-2013, 10:45 AM
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love u too & yea.
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06-09-2013, 11:08 AM
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haha, love this one...dead at my feedback.
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What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope. |
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06-09-2013, 11:11 AM
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thanks sweetheart.
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Suspicion confirmed. Robranda is lucifer incarnate.
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