When I get to Heaven
 

When I get to heaven I'll sing the wondrous of love of God,
When I get to I'll sing his mercy.
When I get to Heaven I'll sing his grace,
He'll prepare a place for me.
When I get to Heaven a day of rejoicing will be,
When I get to Heaven I'll see God.
When I get to Heaven I'll shout for Victory!
When I get to Heaven I'll praise the Lord,
When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

HoF

delivery reminds me of

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_Ua8iOR0g8

I'mma start writing more & longer lines, I'm an amazing writer... thanks for reading guys.

Wow this was amazing, this deeply touched my soul. Thank you for sharing.

When I get to Heaven I'll see God.
^My fav line of your poem.

Holy fuck, this was some incredible piece of work. Thanks for sharing.

Stand behind me Satan!

I was liking this, believing you were sincerely praising and offering up humble love to Elohim of the heavens...

That is until I read your last line of course. Make no mistake, you are baring a deceptive false light.

When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

Reference:

2 Corinthians 11:14
Revelations 12:9

And...

Isaiah 14:12-14

12How art thou fallen from heaven, O Lucifer, son of the morning! how art thou cut down to the ground, which didst weaken the nations!

13For thou hast said in thine heart, I will ascend into heaven, I will exalt my throne above the stars of Elohim: I will sit also upon the mount of the congregation, in the sides of the north:

14I will ascend above the heights of the clouds; I will be like the most High.

Consider this a critique.


Or your last line

When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

Can mean to praise even harder and worship more.



Hard to tell. Otherwise this is a well thought out piece and is subtle in its softness. Good drop.

Do you have autism why wont you respond me you handicapped bitch

cool poem type thing..

Don't be replying to my things with unnecessary questions, & thanks guys!

Love ya girl, wanna write a hook for an upcoming collab I have???

love u too & yea.

haha, love this one...dead at my feedback.

thanks sweetheart.

Suspicion confirmed. Robranda is lucifer incarnate.