Minding My Business

Camp Bell · 05-30-2013, 10:57 PM

im minding my business...
getting sophisticated with these script arrangements
my description faceless with phrases sick as AIDS is
but its amazing how quick yall praise pens thats basic
lets shift the mayhem, swag on that casey kahne shit
im winning races, restrictor plates, my engine breaking
..... "bro snapped" is how you explain my language...
at the old trap, dope packs, embrace the caine pitched
ill make ya favorites but no, wax wont take the favors
raidens back in raiders black, my mistake, vader matte
my texting range is that of a texas ranger's main attack
son based with a saiyons wrath, wasted, blazing hash
in an asian slave encasement, raiding my ramen stash
the savior of flavor rap, hope ya savor the taste of that

CopyPat · 05-31-2013, 12:58 AM

dayum. talk about short and sweet. this was really good man. super enjoyable to read. coulda kept reading more like this, but no filler , got to the point. i have zero bad to say about it, feeling it for sure. i liked when u incorporated the second rhyme scheme with bro snapped old trap etc.. on its own very simple but combined with the main explain my language scheme made it way more complex and dope... also on second thought the sick as aids is is probably the most played line ever so minus props for that but other than that this is dope lol. keep posting man and i'll keep peepin. hit me back with some feed on my times up piece if u get a chance

Mr. J · 05-31-2013, 06:40 PM

Thiz was nice for its shortness
the.vibe was sick and your flow stayed on point...
didn't like that bro snapped idea though
nice drop regardless

VividEnds · 05-31-2013, 07:55 PM

Restriction plates line was ill

05-30-2013, 10:57 PM	#1
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	Minding My Business im minding my business... getting sophisticated with these script arrangements my description faceless with phrases sick as AIDS is but its amazing how quick yall praise pens thats basic lets shift the mayhem, swag on that casey kahne shit im winning races, restrictor plates, my engine breaking ..... "bro snapped" is how you explain my language... at the old trap, dope packs, embrace the caine pitched ill make ya favorites but no, wax wont take the favors raidens back in raiders black, my mistake, vader matte my texting range is that of a texas ranger's main attack son based with a saiyons wrath, wasted, blazing hash in an asian slave encasement, raiding my ramen stash the savior of flavor rap, hope ya savor the taste of that __________________ get high. write rhymes.

05-31-2013, 06:40 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Thiz was nice for its shortness the.vibe was sick and your flow stayed on point... didn't like that bro snapped idea though nice drop regardless __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

05-31-2013, 07:55 PM	#4
VividEnds Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 226 Rep Power: 0	Restriction plates line was ill __________________ no matter what side you see it's only one side ______________________________ __________________ _________ _____ ___ _

05-31-2013, 12:58 AM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	dayum. talk about short and sweet. this was really good man. super enjoyable to read. coulda kept reading more like this, but no filler , got to the point. i have zero bad to say about it, feeling it for sure. i liked when u incorporated the second rhyme scheme with bro snapped old trap etc.. on its own very simple but combined with the main explain my language scheme made it way more complex and dope... also on second thought the sick as aids is is probably the most played line ever so minus props for that but other than that this is dope lol. keep posting man and i'll keep peepin. hit me back with some feed on my times up piece if u get a chance