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Camp Bell 05-30-2013 10:57 PM

Minding My Business
 
im minding my business...
getting sophisticated with these script arrangements
my description faceless with phrases sick as AIDS is
but its amazing how quick yall praise pens thats basic
lets shift the mayhem, swag on that casey kahne shit
im winning races, restrictor plates, my engine breaking
..... "bro snapped" is how you explain my language...
at the old trap, dope packs, embrace the caine pitched
ill make ya favorites but no, wax wont take the favors
raidens back in raiders black, my mistake, vader matte
my texting range is that of a texas ranger's main attack
son based with a saiyons wrath, wasted, blazing hash
in an asian slave encasement, raiding my ramen stash
the savior of flavor rap, hope ya savor the taste of that

CopyPat 05-31-2013 12:58 AM

dayum. talk about short and sweet. this was really good man. super enjoyable to read. coulda kept reading more like this, but no filler , got to the point. i have zero bad to say about it, feeling it for sure. i liked when u incorporated the second rhyme scheme with bro snapped old trap etc.. on its own very simple but combined with the main explain my language scheme made it way more complex and dope... also on second thought the sick as aids is is probably the most played line ever so minus props for that but other than that this is dope lol. keep posting man and i'll keep peepin. hit me back with some feed on my times up piece if u get a chance

Mr. J 05-31-2013 06:40 PM

Thiz was nice for its shortness
the.vibe was sick and your flow stayed on point...
didn't like that bro snapped idea though
nice drop regardless

VividEnds 05-31-2013 07:55 PM

Restriction plates line was ill


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