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Split · 01-29-2014, 12:30 AM

The oceanographer stepped to the light,
and felt an awkward sense of surprise.
A tingling cold. But didn't register why
the colors and palleted blends had turned so
unnatural upon the ballast's descent.
A light chiascurro, gradual on the canvassed conception,
was badly distended for what the mammoth was destined.
A mammalian museum piece.
Gallant. Promethean deity.
Callous, seething, she cursed the being she
met in the depths of the Barrier Reef.
Marie Therese could barely believe
the shape she had swam past.
A grazing, old land mass, weathered
and barnacled with better tomorrows
ahead. And she would hold her hands back-
when the aquamarine beams concocted
an aura between her the God of the Seaweed.
She, the reverent daughter. Heart impossibly beating.
But now, all she could see was a fish out of water.

Split · 01-30-2014, 11:49 AM

up over Frank

Wise Wiggles · 01-30-2014, 01:42 PM

how often do you aesop rock?

Split · 01-31-2014, 01:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Whys Weighs

how often do you aesop rock?

not often

Frank · 01-31-2014, 02:29 AM

'Weathered in barnacles of better tomorrow' was beautifully said. Well done.

The museum of natural history is an impossible task but you've got yourself a niffty little exhibition show here critter.

Send me some lyrics and we'll collaborate

Smooth · 02-01-2014, 09:47 AM

Gallant. Promethean deity.
Callous, seething, she cursed the being she
met in the depths of the Barrier Reef.
Marie Therese could barely believe
the shape she had swam past.
A grazing, old land mass, weathered
and barnacled with better tomorrows

You said whaaaat?? picaso on the canvas everybody!
awesome piece. Classic Split.

Exis · 02-01-2014, 09:55 AM

Lol @ Wayz Wizzy...and you owe me feed bitch, nah...this cool tho.Some shit read awkward to me but I'm drunk so what would I know.

Wise Wiggles · 02-01-2014, 03:26 PM

excuse you?

Exis · 02-04-2014, 07:25 AM

I'm excused...

01-29-2014, 12:30 AM	#1
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	airfish The oceanographer stepped to the light, and felt an awkward sense of surprise. A tingling cold. But didn't register why the colors and palleted blends had turned so unnatural upon the ballast's descent. A light chiascurro, gradual on the canvassed conception, was badly distended for what the mammoth was destined. A mammalian museum piece. Gallant. Promethean deity. Callous, seething, she cursed the being she met in the depths of the Barrier Reef. Marie Therese could barely believe the shape she had swam past. A grazing, old land mass, weathered and barnacled with better tomorrows ahead. And she would hold her hands back- when the aquamarine beams concocted an aura between her the God of the Seaweed. She, the reverent daughter. Heart impossibly beating. But now, all she could see was a fish out of water. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com Last edited by Split; 01-29-2014 at 01:03 AM.

01-30-2014, 11:49 AM	#2
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	up over Frank __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

01-30-2014, 01:42 PM	#3
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	how often do you aesop rock? __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

01-31-2014, 02:29 AM	#5
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	'Weathered in barnacles of better tomorrow' was beautifully said. Well done. The museum of natural history is an impossible task but you've got yourself a niffty little exhibition show here critter. Send me some lyrics and we'll collaborate __________________ *VETWORK*

02-01-2014, 09:47 AM	#6
Smooth Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	Gallant. Promethean deity. Callous, seething, she cursed the being she met in the depths of the Barrier Reef. Marie Therese could barely believe the shape she had swam past. A grazing, old land mass, weathered and barnacled with better tomorrows You said whaaaat?? picaso on the canvas everybody! awesome piece. Classic Split. __________________

02-01-2014, 09:55 AM	#7
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Lol @ Wayz Wizzy...and you owe me feed bitch, nah...this cool tho.Some shit read awkward to me but I'm drunk so what would I know.

02-01-2014, 03:26 PM	#8
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	excuse you? __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

02-04-2014, 07:25 AM	#9
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I'm excused...