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Nigma · 09-22-2013, 08:43 PM

It's funny, people test when their sheets as feeble as fetal necks
Most lethal features present their freckles, blemish, and fecal breath
It's easy credits when ya winning records lookin like Easter presents
See me teaching D the steps until Dougie Dougies with E's perspective
Relieving Z's like eating breakfast with the weakest breed of you amateurs
I keep the hands of texting veterans each in a separate canister
And leave them backwards destined to repay the debt like Lanisters
I'll take your day job struggles impale your blessing of cleverness
Ya fake as Snape taught muggles, you failed attempting to severe us
Ya never bust, you'd double down on 20 just to hit an ace
My genitals a trip, unload my luggage on your bitches faces
Mission statement: Buck and cut the site like splitting lasics
It's a mix of viscous hatred, a pinch of rage and the gift of Satan...

e11even · 09-22-2013, 09:22 PM

fuckin fire. your flow was solid af, very visual imagery and dope shit-talk. a bit more in-your-face brand of metaphors, but this came off kinda nice.

"Mission statement: Buck and cut the site like splitting lasics
It's a mix of viscous hatred, a pinch of rage and the gift of Satan..."

a good amount of fave lines but this one was pretty dope for me.

Inno · 09-22-2013, 09:49 PM

dope rhyming right here...first line was a bit weird for me dunno...but right after that the shit picked up with that dope ass rhyming you had going in this bitch...I mean

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Most lethal features present their freckles, blemish, and fecal breath
It's easy credits when ya winning records lookin like Easter presents
See me teaching D the steps until Dougie Dougies with E's perspective
Relieving Z's like eating breakfast with the weakest breed of you amateurs

that shit was ill son...ill.

CopyPat · 09-23-2013, 01:11 AM

hahaha. this was a little different that im used to seeing from u the luggage line of cuming semen into the other dudes gf line was funny hahahaha. obv just a quick little spit so im not gonna get into huge detail. i know what ur capable of.. this was minimal effort

Nigma · 09-23-2013, 09:57 PM

appreciate it folks, was a quick write yesterday, liked how it turned out

Phanes · 09-24-2013, 02:16 AM

that dougie line was cool. bunch of interesting references in there. I enjoyed the quick read

09-22-2013, 08:43 PM	#1
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Taking Attendance... It's funny, people test when their sheets as feeble as fetal necks Most lethal features present their freckles, blemish, and fecal breath It's easy credits when ya winning records lookin like Easter presents See me teaching D the steps until Dougie Dougies with E's perspective Relieving Z's like eating breakfast with the weakest breed of you amateurs I keep the hands of texting veterans each in a separate canister And leave them backwards destined to repay the debt like Lanisters I'll take your day job struggles impale your blessing of cleverness Ya fake as Snape taught muggles, you failed attempting to severe us Ya never bust, you'd double down on 20 just to hit an ace My genitals a trip, unload my luggage on your bitches faces Mission statement: Buck and cut the site like splitting lasics It's a mix of viscous hatred, a pinch of rage and the gift of Satan... __________________

09-22-2013, 09:22 PM	#2
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	fuckin fire. your flow was solid af, very visual imagery and dope shit-talk. a bit more in-your-face brand of metaphors, but this came off kinda nice. "Mission statement: Buck and cut the site like splitting lasics It's a mix of viscous hatred, a pinch of rage and the gift of Satan..." a good amount of fave lines but this one was pretty dope for me. __________________ Ahem.

09-23-2013, 01:11 AM	#4
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahaha. this was a little different that im used to seeing from u the luggage line of cuming semen into the other dudes gf line was funny hahahaha. obv just a quick little spit so im not gonna get into huge detail. i know what ur capable of.. this was minimal effort __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

09-23-2013, 09:57 PM	#5
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	appreciate it folks, was a quick write yesterday, liked how it turned out __________________

09-24-2013, 02:16 AM	#6
Phanes Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 16 Rep Power: 0	that dougie line was cool. bunch of interesting references in there. I enjoyed the quick read