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Nigma 09-22-2013 08:43 PM

Taking Attendance...
 
It's funny, people test when their sheets as feeble as fetal necks
Most lethal features present their freckles, blemish, and fecal breath
It's easy credits when ya winning records lookin like Easter presents
See me teaching D the steps until Dougie Dougies with E's perspective
Relieving Z's like eating breakfast with the weakest breed of you amateurs
I keep the hands of texting veterans each in a separate canister
And leave them backwards destined to repay the debt like Lanisters
I'll take your day job struggles impale your blessing of cleverness
Ya fake as Snape taught muggles, you failed attempting to severe us
Ya never bust, you'd double down on 20 just to hit an ace
My genitals a trip, unload my luggage on your bitches faces
Mission statement: Buck and cut the site like splitting lasics
It's a mix of viscous hatred, a pinch of rage and the gift of Satan...

e11even 09-22-2013 09:22 PM

fuckin fire. your flow was solid af, very visual imagery and dope shit-talk. a bit more in-your-face brand of metaphors, but this came off kinda nice.

"Mission statement: Buck and cut the site like splitting lasics
It's a mix of viscous hatred, a pinch of rage and the gift of Satan..."

a good amount of fave lines but this one was pretty dope for me.

Inno 09-22-2013 09:49 PM

dope rhyming right here...first line was a bit weird for me dunno...but right after that the shit picked up with that dope ass rhyming you had going in this bitch...I mean

Quote:

Most lethal features present their freckles, blemish, and fecal breath
It's easy credits when ya winning records lookin like Easter presents
See me teaching D the steps until Dougie Dougies with E's perspective
Relieving Z's like eating breakfast with the weakest breed of you amateurs
that shit was ill son...ill.

CopyPat 09-23-2013 01:11 AM

hahaha. this was a little different that im used to seeing from u the luggage line of cuming semen into the other dudes gf line was funny hahahaha. obv just a quick little spit so im not gonna get into huge detail. i know what ur capable of.. this was minimal effort

Nigma 09-23-2013 09:57 PM

appreciate it folks, was a quick write yesterday, liked how it turned out

Phanes 09-24-2013 02:16 AM

that dougie line was cool. bunch of interesting references in there. I enjoyed the quick read


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