techniques

Mitch · 09-22-2013, 10:23 PM

I seen you try hard, with the rye hard. You been drinking, i smell you, pussy stinking, what the hell you clean it with, you fiendish prick, clean that shit.
I need a spliff, to chill from that funky smell. my Momma' tells me that ain't everybody healthy, clean yourself G.
Bonita Apple Bottom rockin', I roll on some solo, no cock jockin' sloppy talker trotters flawkin' mockin' my mojo. I smoke my doja with smokin' mocha, connect my cellelur phone to my vacation home station dojo without radiant radio wave complications. No, no. I'm an expert with exceptional technical tech work.

Nigma · 09-22-2013, 10:33 PM

Lol that was dope man, fun to read stream of conciousness type shit. Would be interesting in seein you write a formed verse

CopyPat · 09-23-2013, 01:16 AM

hahaha!! awesome. this was waaaaaaaaaaaayyyy tooo short!! u wewre JUST getting warmed up and then boom it fuckin ended. i seriously want u to make this longer or make a new one just like it. i was about to feel this for sure, lol. i liked the style.. cocky, in ur face... not cock in ur face though. very original.. not trying to be anything ur not. just realness just flow haha we'de have a dope collab i think... i've written tons of peices like this try to find em i think u'de like em dude. stay active, ill check ur next one if there is

e11even · 09-23-2013, 05:35 AM

Literally flowin, yet not as fractured as my brainstorms. Though that first stream of thought was leading in a diff direction, I think I liked it overall. I'm hoping to see more concentrated stuff in the future... more spot on topical pieces. I kinda dig your approach, but it still doesn't seem complete enough for me. Good job, though.

09-22-2013, 10:23 PM	#1
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	techniques I seen you try hard, with the rye hard. You been drinking, i smell you, pussy stinking, what the hell you clean it with, you fiendish prick, clean that shit. I need a spliff, to chill from that funky smell. my Momma' tells me that ain't everybody healthy, clean yourself G. Bonita Apple Bottom rockin', I roll on some solo, no cock jockin' sloppy talker trotters flawkin' mockin' my mojo. I smoke my doja with smokin' mocha, connect my cellelur phone to my vacation home station dojo without radiant radio wave complications. No, no. I'm an expert with exceptional technical tech work.

09-22-2013, 10:33 PM	#2
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Lol that was dope man, fun to read stream of conciousness type shit. Would be interesting in seein you write a formed verse __________________

09-23-2013, 01:16 AM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahaha!! awesome. this was waaaaaaaaaaaayyyy tooo short!! u wewre JUST getting warmed up and then boom it fuckin ended. i seriously want u to make this longer or make a new one just like it. i was about to feel this for sure, lol. i liked the style.. cocky, in ur face... not cock in ur face though. very original.. not trying to be anything ur not. just realness just flow haha we'de have a dope collab i think... i've written tons of peices like this try to find em i think u'de like em dude. stay active, ill check ur next one if there is __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

09-23-2013, 05:35 AM	#4
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Literally flowin, yet not as fractured as my brainstorms. Though that first stream of thought was leading in a diff direction, I think I liked it overall. I'm hoping to see more concentrated stuff in the future... more spot on topical pieces. I kinda dig your approach, but it still doesn't seem complete enough for me. Good job, though. __________________ Ahem.