techniques
 

I seen you try hard, with the rye hard. You been drinking, i smell you, pussy stinking, what the hell you clean it with, you fiendish prick, clean that shit.
I need a spliff, to chill from that funky smell. my Momma' tells me that ain't everybody healthy, clean yourself G.
Bonita Apple Bottom rockin', I roll on some solo, no cock jockin' sloppy talker trotters flawkin' mockin' my mojo. I smoke my doja with smokin' mocha, connect my cellelur phone to my vacation home station dojo without radiant radio wave complications. No, no. I'm an expert with exceptional technical tech work.

Lol that was dope man, fun to read stream of conciousness type shit. Would be interesting in seein you write a formed verse

hahaha!! awesome. this was waaaaaaaaaaaayyyy tooo short!! u wewre JUST getting warmed up and then boom it fuckin ended. i seriously want u to make this longer or make a new one just like it. i was about to feel this for sure, lol. i liked the style.. cocky, in ur face... not cock in ur face though. very original.. not trying to be anything ur not. just realness just flow haha we'de have a dope collab i think... i've written tons of peices like this try to find em i think u'de like em dude. stay active, ill check ur next one if there is

Literally flowin, yet not as fractured as my brainstorms. Though that first stream of thought was leading in a diff direction, I think I liked it overall. I'm hoping to see more concentrated stuff in the future... more spot on topical pieces. I kinda dig your approach, but it still doesn't seem complete enough for me. Good job, though.