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Old 09-12-2013, 04:11 AM   #1
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Old 09-12-2013, 08:37 PM   #2
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fuck your dame cause she ask and wondered i wonder to
why its so easy for me to fall under the thunder moon
cut my emotion 1 tenth of you beneath the ocean gravity pulled to soon

a matrix on a mop in a janitors room round out the cube my vains
are blue horseshoe crabs cry a ugly sound to the mountain shrew

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Old 09-12-2013, 10:07 PM   #3
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always an underrated poster and i dont understand why. definitely have a creatively different style. which at first i didnt rock with to much but ive grown accostumed to. this was an ill drop with tons of fast paced content. would be crazy if spit the right way to a fire ass beat.

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Old 09-12-2013, 10:41 PM   #4
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Decent. I liked the lines whys quoted.
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