The Match and The Fuse

Zen · 01-30-2013, 01:19 PM

A.K.A. The Impeccable Story of the Inseprable Match and The Fuse

Ok well let me go ahead and tell you this is not intended as a rap song...In fact I don't know what it's intended to be lol. I've messed around with the flow of the song because I can hear the song in my head playing and know when to change it so this might be a difficult read for some just a warning but I figured some of yall might wanna read it. Oh and this is completely different from anything I ever write so it's probably not for everyone.

Feel the wind, Hear the sound
Of the rain hitting the ground.
Fears here again, So much that you can taste it at last
As you see the thunder crash
So...
God damnit the Night's getting Darker, Ever since the Last Time I Saw Her
And now my Might's drifiting Farther, I'm just wondering what it's Like Bein A Father
But Now...
I wish I could tell ya but I don't know and that's the truth
Sometimes I Just feel like a failure and goin on has no use
I wish I could get out this trailer and kill my bastard roots
And Now...
I feel like half a recluse, I don't even remember why I'm mad at you
Maybe we're a match and a fuse, Baby we're a match and a fuse
So I say We...
Light it Quick, Ain't no reason to fight this shit
This is the only life we get, And you best believe I'd die for it
What about you?
Now I know you got feelings too, So let's say Me and You
We Decide to see it through, Then would you believe it's true
Now...
I don't know if I'm okay I suppose I'm right in between
But I was thinkin someday You'd sit at my side as my queen
Now I do what I say, and I say what I mean
But sometimes you gotta pay with life for your dreams

Geno · 01-30-2013, 09:07 PM

Upping for feed.

Camp Bell · 01-31-2013, 11:29 PM

this was perfect...had a nice flow all the way through, concept was consistent
it had that poem feel, maybe with a beat, it would be a dope verse to a song..
my faves:

God damnit the Night's getting Darker, Ever since the Last Time I Saw Her
And now my Might's drifiting Farther, I'm just wondering what it's Like Bein A Father
But Now...

This is the only life we get, And you best believe I'd die for it
What about you?
Now I know you got feelings too, So let's say Me and You
We Decide to see it through, Then would you believe it's true
Now...

I don't know if I'm okay I suppose I'm right in between
But I was thinkin someday You'd sit at my side as my queen
Now I do what I say, and I say what I mean
But sometimes you gotta pay with life for your dreams

Zen · 02-01-2013, 12:12 PM

Appreciate that Camp. Much love

01-30-2013, 01:19 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	The Match and The Fuse A.K.A. The Impeccable Story of the Inseprable Match and The Fuse Ok well let me go ahead and tell you this is not intended as a rap song...In fact I don't know what it's intended to be lol. I've messed around with the flow of the song because I can hear the song in my head playing and know when to change it so this might be a difficult read for some just a warning but I figured some of yall might wanna read it. Oh and this is completely different from anything I ever write so it's probably not for everyone. Feel the wind, Hear the sound Of the rain hitting the ground. Fears here again, So much that you can taste it at last As you see the thunder crash So... God damnit the Night's getting Darker, Ever since the Last Time I Saw Her And now my Might's drifiting Farther, I'm just wondering what it's Like Bein A Father But Now... I wish I could tell ya but I don't know and that's the truth Sometimes I Just feel like a failure and goin on has no use I wish I could get out this trailer and kill my bastard roots And Now... I feel like half a recluse, I don't even remember why I'm mad at you Maybe we're a match and a fuse, Baby we're a match and a fuse So I say We... Light it Quick, Ain't no reason to fight this shit This is the only life we get, And you best believe I'd die for it What about you? Now I know you got feelings too, So let's say Me and You We Decide to see it through, Then would you believe it's true Now... I don't know if I'm okay I suppose I'm right in between But I was thinkin someday You'd sit at my side as my queen Now I do what I say, and I say what I mean But sometimes you gotta pay with life for your dreams

01-30-2013, 09:07 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Upping for feed. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-31-2013, 11:29 PM	#3
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	this was perfect...had a nice flow all the way through, concept was consistent it had that poem feel, maybe with a beat, it would be a dope verse to a song.. my faves: God damnit the Night's getting Darker, Ever since the Last Time I Saw Her And now my Might's drifiting Farther, I'm just wondering what it's Like Bein A Father But Now... This is the only life we get, And you best believe I'd die for it What about you? Now I know you got feelings too, So let's say Me and You We Decide to see it through, Then would you believe it's true Now... I don't know if I'm okay I suppose I'm right in between But I was thinkin someday You'd sit at my side as my queen Now I do what I say, and I say what I mean But sometimes you gotta pay with life for your dreams __________________ get high. write rhymes.

02-01-2013, 12:12 PM	#4
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Appreciate that Camp. Much love