WEEK 6: Brokenhal0 0-4 VS Maximus 0-0 BROKEN WINS OPEN FOR FEED

UPN Zuch · 11-09-2020, 04:02 AM

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Verses due 11:59pm EST November 12, 2020 (Thursday)

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brokenhal0 · 11-12-2020, 07:55 AM

Can this misprint reign? Can you fix the pain ?
or you just flinch away like a dog getting hit for days
time for you to die my smile sick im giving chase
maximus assimilates as his soul erodes on my dinner plate
Always been you , I always been the prey
always been depraved , demonstration for the day
Im stalking you , walking a few steps away
your walking too but your clueless about my blade
and im not gonna stop till i get food in my flower bed
rollie pollies crawling out you're head
A fan of mine asking for a signature after the battles over
unstable legend maximum weapons to rag a soldier
that's how i roll,threw every battle told,lacking closure
i cast a cut on your face that will not scab over
cast your bars down to hades until the rocks will smolder
your screams grow silent as my heart gets colder
maximize this power with so much force it will topple boulders
maximize the caliber so with one shot I take out your ancestral folder
look at your hair-doo your looking like a weirdo modern day Nosferatu
smelling like blue cheese maximus personality plain as a dot on a hindu ...

fraze · 11-15-2020, 07:32 AM

Not going to give a full breakdown because this seemed like a topical verse that switched over into no show filler at some point. Cool multis tho in the first few bars.

11-12-2020, 07:55 AM	#2
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 522 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	Can this misprint reign? Can you fix the pain ? or you just flinch away like a dog getting hit for days time for you to die my smile sick im giving chase maximus assimilates as his soul erodes on my dinner plate Always been you , I always been the prey always been depraved , demonstration for the day Im stalking you , walking a few steps away your walking too but your clueless about my blade and im not gonna stop till i get food in my flower bed rollie pollies crawling out you're head A fan of mine asking for a signature after the battles over unstable legend maximum weapons to rag a soldier that's how i roll,threw every battle told,lacking closure i cast a cut on your face that will not scab over cast your bars down to hades until the rocks will smolder your screams grow silent as my heart gets colder maximize this power with so much force it will topple boulders maximize the caliber so with one shot I take out your ancestral folder look at your hair-doo your looking like a weirdo modern day Nosferatu smelling like blue cheese maximus personality plain as a dot on a hindu ... Last edited by brokenhal0; 11-12-2020 at 08:22 AM.

11-15-2020, 07:32 AM	#3
fraze Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Louisville, KY Posts: 972 Battle Record: 14-24 Rep Power: 32898726	Not going to give a full breakdown because this seemed like a topical verse that switched over into no show filler at some point. Cool multis tho in the first few bars.