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His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer
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Ryno’s verse
Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts... If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt. Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook... The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush. Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me... Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story. After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker... At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure. I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney... If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie. |
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Jesus this was bad.
Vote - Hush |
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If you're not going to vote seriously then there's no need for your depressing sass. You dont even battle so stfu.
Hush - the cobwebs was LOL... rest of the verse was standard or slightly corny.. esp the AD line.. Ryno - the decent concepts are there but the swag isn't. Every line could've been funnier... the cuties was ok... Since I cant vote tie or redo I'm going with Hush for making me chuckle.
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His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place Fire concept, think it could’ve been done better She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays Lol Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick Don’t get this shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump Not feelin U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine weak U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer __________________ Ok I guess Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts... If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt. Lol top notch kinda a stretch but funny Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook... The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush. Ok Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me... Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story. Not much going on here After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker... At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure. Basic again I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney... If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie. Didn’t like this Hush had one more good one but both fell off pretty bad towards the end I think. Rusty old match. Vote - hush |
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Hush - totem and cobwebs were dope, rest was blah.
Ryno - Top Notch was cool, rest was pretty much blah. Hush had two good ones, Ryno had one decent one. May god have mercy on your souls. V - Hush
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His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine I feel like there's a dope bar with this idea, but this isn't it Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts... If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt.. After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker... At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure. this made me chuckle Props for getting the verses in early, glad to see you're both contributing/shaking off rust but I have Hush with harder hits V/Hush |
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Hush:
His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place - fire. She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays - relevant, Halloween vibe. Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick - nice. Kept the clever lines going through the set up, which always gets extra credit from me. shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump - decent. U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine - lol dope. U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer - solid way to close it out. Ryno: Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts... If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt. - Okay, Benoit. Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook... The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush. - under arms is played. Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me... Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story. - I wouldn't. After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker... At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure. - okay... I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney... If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie - really? I mean... Not really close. At all. Hush is dope. Vote - Hush
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Hush
Totem poles Cobwebs Ryno Top notch was almost there. I’ve seen you come better. Hush first 2 bars won this for him. Ryno can do better tho Vote hush |
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both r wack..
vote - draw |
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His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place ok cool She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays ehh Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick ok shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump not feeling this U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine lmao U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer not getting this vs. Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts... If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt. lol Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook... The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush. not felign this Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me... Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story. weak.. are you sure about that After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker... At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure. okk I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney... If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie. wordy could have been more harsher Tight battle but I'm calling it to Hush. I'm used to see him come harsher but that was on the pic league so I'm looking forward for his next week verse, cool stuff from ryno anyways but havent seen him on the scene since a while so I'm going to assume its rust. v/hush |
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Cobwebs was ok
Trump line was cool Ryno had nothing I liked BUT dreadful had mad potential to be a banger Shoulda said sutn like dreadful under arms/could braid her pit hair etc Hush gmv, whack battle
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His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place nice....great concept She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays lol okay solid Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick interesting nameplay...i think it works and is cool shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump cool conceptually but too indirect to be impactful U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine played U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer cool sports ref...couldve been more developed vs Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts... If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt. Lol this is cool Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook... The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush. lmao at your bitch ahs armpit hari for a punch...i chuckled Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me... Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story. nah ez After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker... At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure. lol funny short punch in a way but just ok I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney... If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie. okay okay dece movie ref I think this is kindve close but Hush's concepts were a lot more creative with the concepts....Hush got it, good to see Ryno back |
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Got hush here for the opener which was hilarious
Not really feeling much from ryno You have 4’5” action figures? Anyway, vote hush and Corleone for death also |
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Hush won hands down... proud of you little man...
Hush won with his first 2 bars...
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Hush totem pole bar was sick
Both battlers came solid but I think hush had more fire power here It’s early for ryno, rush is shaking off. Looking forward to seeing more Vote - hush
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Ryno was a cut below what I’m used to seeing from him tbh, nothing really resonated with me other than top notch head which was cool
Hush was also below standard here but I think he was consistent and won convincingly totem pole easily the line of the battle V/Hush |
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