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UPN Zuch 10-01-2020 11:07 PM

WEEK 1: Hush vs Ryno HUSH WINS
 
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Hush 10-03-2020 06:56 PM

His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place
She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways
That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays
Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid
One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick
shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped
so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump
U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame
Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine
U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother
Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer

UPN Zuch 10-04-2020 12:18 PM

Ryno’s verse

Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts...
If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt.
Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook...
The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush.
Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me...
Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story.
After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker...
At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure.
I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney...
If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie.

dull boy 10-04-2020 12:24 PM

Jesus this was bad.

Vote - Hush

Aero 10-04-2020 01:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 787936)
Jesus this was bad.

Vote - Hush

If you're not going to vote seriously then there's no need for your depressing sass. You dont even battle so stfu.

Hush - the cobwebs was LOL... rest of the verse was standard or slightly corny.. esp the AD line..

Ryno - the decent concepts are there but the swag isn't. Every line could've been funnier... the cuties was ok...

Since I cant vote tie or redo I'm going with Hush for making me chuckle.

evaD 10-05-2020 02:33 AM

His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place
Fire concept, think it could’ve been done better
She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways
That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays
Lol
Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid
One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick
Don’t get this
shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped
so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump
Not feelin
U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame
Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine
weak
U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother
Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer
__________________
Ok I guess




Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts...
If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt.
Lol top notch kinda a stretch but funny
Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook...
The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush.
Ok
Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me...
Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story.
Not much going on here
After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker...
At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure.
Basic again
I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney...
If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie.
Didn’t like this


Hush had one more good one but both fell off pretty bad towards the end I think. Rusty old match.

Vote - hush

UserName 10-05-2020 10:17 AM

Hush - totem and cobwebs were dope, rest was blah.

Ryno - Top Notch was cool, rest was pretty much blah.

Hush had two good ones, Ryno had one decent one.

May god have mercy on your souls.

V - Hush

Sharp 10-07-2020 07:44 AM

His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place
shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped
so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump
U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame
Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine
I feel like there's a dope bar with this idea, but this isn't it



Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts...
If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt..
After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker...
At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure.
this made me chuckle

Props for getting the verses in early, glad to see you're both contributing/shaking off rust but I have Hush with harder hits

V/Hush

Universe 10-07-2020 10:46 AM

Hush:

His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place


- fire.

She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways
That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays


- relevant, Halloween vibe.


Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid
One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick


- nice. Kept the clever lines going through the set up, which always gets extra credit from me.

shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped
so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump


- decent.

U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame
Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine


- lol dope.

U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother
Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer


- solid way to close it out.


Ryno:

Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts...
If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt.


- Okay, Benoit.

Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook...
The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush
.

- under arms is played.

Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me...
Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story.


- I wouldn't.

After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker...
At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure.

- okay...

I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney...
If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie


- really?

I mean... Not really close. At all. Hush is dope.

Vote - Hush

Wanderer 10-07-2020 11:25 AM

Hush

Totem poles
Cobwebs


Ryno

Top notch was almost there. I’ve seen you come better.


Hush first 2 bars won this for him. Ryno can do better tho

Vote hush

corleone 10-07-2020 01:04 PM

both r wack..

vote - draw

Mac 10-07-2020 03:42 PM

His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place
ok cool

She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways
That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays
ehh

Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid
One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick
ok

shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped
so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump
not feeling this

U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame
Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine
lmao

U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother
Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer
not getting this

vs.

Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts...
If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt.
lol

Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook...
The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush.
not felign this

Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me...
Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story.
weak.. are you sure about that

After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker...
At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure.
okk

I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney...
If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie.
wordy could have been more harsher

Tight battle but I'm calling it to Hush. I'm used to see him come harsher but that was on the pic league so I'm looking forward for his next week verse, cool stuff from ryno anyways but havent seen him on the scene since a while so I'm going to assume its rust. v/hush

Barcotic 10-08-2020 07:23 PM

Cobwebs was ok
Trump line was cool

Ryno had nothing I liked BUT dreadful had mad potential to be a banger
Shoulda said sutn like dreadful under arms/could braid her pit hair etc

Hush gmv, whack battle

Blue Bayou 10-08-2020 07:51 PM

His chick a animal wit the mouth work ... dumb but her brains great
Im toting poles.. she a totem pole . Known for repeated head In the same place
nice....great concept
She been a whore for ten years .. but she keep it spicy in a lotta ways
That pussy got cobwebs .. and that’s cuz she decorates it for the holidays
lol okay solid
Rhyno never charged shit.. u don’t even have a credit card... this kid is timid
One punch have a bone sticking out the middle of ya face .. now live the gimmick
interesting nameplay...i think it works and is cool
shooters got tha scoop on u.. they see u- u get wet up and slumped
so come around without a mask and u gone catch it.. word to president trump
cool conceptually but too indirect to be impactful
U too pussy to act tough ... this fein been wack and lame
Nigga u wouldn’t try me unless i was meth k2 or crack cocaine
played
U ain’t nice enough to try and pass me brother
Sure u got a Nugget of talent .. but I’m AD from Three at the buzzer
cool sports ref...couldve been more developed


vs



Who’d slob this loser? He ain’t shining w/ sluts...
If he’s gettin top notch dome, I swear to gawd its from a diving head butt.
Lol this is cool
Gun to ya ugly bitch - ya wifeys shook...
The broads dreadful under arms. Not to mention her pits growin like a bush.
lmao at your bitch ahs armpit hari for a punch...i chuckled
Raps full of lies & this little guy is starting to bore me...
Everything u say is a sham. I’d rather listen to a Corleone story.
nah ez
After this the cops’ll chalk u up w/ a laugh n snicker...
At 4’5 I bet ur outline is the size of a fkn action figure.
lol funny short punch in a way but just ok
I bet he’s a pedo too. It’s sick n it’s looney...
If he rolls w/ a team of “Cuties”, I bet a grand they’re younger than the kids from that movie.
okay okay dece movie ref


I think this is kindve close but Hush's concepts were a lot more creative with the concepts....Hush got it, good to see Ryno back

Destroyer 10-08-2020 10:37 PM

Got hush here for the opener which was hilarious
Not really feeling much from ryno
You have 4’5” action figures?

Anyway, vote hush and Corleone for death also

Ouch 10-09-2020 02:49 AM

Hush won hands down... proud of you little man...


Hush won with his first 2 bars...

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO 10-09-2020 11:27 AM

Hush totem pole bar was sick

Both battlers came solid but I think hush had more fire power here

It’s early for ryno, rush is shaking off. Looking forward to seeing more

Vote - hush

Adverse 10-09-2020 11:45 AM

Ryno was a cut below what I’m used to seeing from him tbh, nothing really resonated with me other than top notch head which was cool

Hush was also below standard here but I think he was consistent and won convincingly totem pole easily the line of the battle

V/Hush


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