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Ukrainian Howlitzers
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,098
Battle Record: 41-24
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - NBL Season 3
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![]() NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 16 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more *Will not count towards NBL record. Get those pics up* @Adverse @Mac
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Join Date: Feb 2013
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Battle Record: 37-28
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![]() Last edited by Adverse; 06-17-2020 at 02:04 AM. |
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12 is good!
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Senior Member
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![]() ![]() 12 i wish i didnt see how u look like.. now it hurts my eyesight ill bust that cap off you cuz ur face not getting enough Spotlight your genes lost the fight trying to make you attractive talk about tradeoffs, that chin's dependent and doesnt pay taxes here we have the unusual corner guy, kinda surprises me a midget that sells high experiences.. that's what I call staying low key you better flee, as I wont make any exception use that rag to choke this wannabe cowboy.. call it a red dead redemption i'll catch all attention, make it nationwide cuz a white guy will be seen hanging out in that park... n wont be ruled a suicide I can see sadness in those wide eyes, trying to have fun we know ur not a self-help book.. but even that dyno behind knows u could use one Last edited by Mac; 06-19-2020 at 05:27 PM. |
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
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![]() ![]() Buzzin off that peach fuzz? I knock it off ya lips when the tech spray Course you got a dirty Sanchez u been fumbling around more asses than that infamous Jet’s play Judging by the physique of this geek, the ladies never say “he looks super strong!” Guess it makes sense why they call you Mac with them Velveeta noodle arms Picture it! This guy on the block with the heat, repeat offendin doin’ bad shit But you ain't hard, we see through this square like the lenses on them glasses You can't hide in that restaurant, you're never safe when I bomb K’s I'll bring the beef to your table with the shells like I'm servin your entree’ You embrace all the stereotypes! Man it's so easy to call it I'm getting rid of this rat quick, it's just ironic he looks like Speedy Gonzalez Should have never agreed to pics, with a face like that you lose every time It's funny because you sipping Margaritas got you juiced on the Lime |
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28
Champed - GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II
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Uppin for votes?
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2016
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enjoyed the read, but Adverse got this easy.
Mac you had a couple of concepts that could've worked better, the opener had potential imo as well as the red dead redemption line... the rest I wasn't feeling tbh. Not sure how new you are to this, but just keep at it, as long as you take the constructive feed people drop, and keep reading battles and writing bro. Ad you're opener was dope, i don't even really like football but even I caught the reference, shells/entrees I dug and thought you finished strong with speedy gonzalez and the closer. Lenses was cool but didn't hit super hard. Thanks for doing the spotlight gents. v/ Adverse |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 734
Battle Record: 33-9
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adverse was good, opener worked.. consistant.. mac had concepts that were there but the execution lacked..
v adverse
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Join Date: May 2020
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Mac your verse was ok but had nothing that really hit for me. Adverse didn’t have any absolute bangers but everything was just a level above for me.
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Ukrainian Howlitzers
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,098
Battle Record: 41-24
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - NBL Season 3
- Alias Tournament II
- Fight Night XLVIII
- Fight Night XXV
- Fight Night XV
- Fight Night (3x)
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Tag Team Season 3
- Lyric Olympics
- 1-2 Punch League (3x)
- Battle Arena League (2x)
- Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
- BA Tag
- NPL Roast
- Netcees Pic League
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Ad wins
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I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip |
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