Ain't Here...

Exis · 05-17-2020, 11:13 PM

Ayo,

Papa said: You gotta strike early & often
Mama said: Hurt 'em with knowledge
I say: If you can't read my body language,
how's you gonna deal with thrown words at your noggin?

Nah all good...

I ain't here to punch ones face kid
Just wanna adjust my aim,
& crush they fate 'til only dust remains
You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes
From cats that lack talent,
Dwellin' over trash they've made
Nigga I live in the present,
You're still stuck in '07
If there's a medal for duckin',
Congrats on 13 years of bein' the recipient brethren
I ain't here to kick it with kiddies, bitches or guests man
& any offerin' of dick will get you instantly beheaded
On site you know who I like,
Who I loathe, completely like hate
& with so many alias's flyin' around
each/everyday, there's no point droppin' names
As someone I truly despise
Is prolly someone I really like anyway!
All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped
At the ready, on stand by
Without watchin' screensavers of fish
All this flippin' & floppin', switchin' & swappin'
I cannot keep up with who's dick you just swallowed,
Which tweet you last sent to some creep you have followed
Attach leash to that collar & get dragged down the street
I'll leave you gagged, bound & treated like black & brown people
Beaten by a dozen black or brown police...

Now tell me, how is we equal?

Johnny 6 feet · 05-19-2020, 08:57 PM

Braggodocious and smooth as silk on the flow man. Your multi's were plenty but never forced. Some really cool stand out lines in this:

"You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes
From cats that lack talent,
Dwellin' over trash they've made"

Sad but true.

"All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped"

Hard punch. I always get an image when I read pieces like this of a dude in the gym hammering a punching bag. Gearing up for the next bout. This was good, solid sparring piece. Nice work.

Thanks for the rep.

05-17-2020, 11:13 PM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Ain't Here... Ayo, Papa said: You gotta strike early & often Mama said: Hurt 'em with knowledge I say: If you can't read my body language, how's you gonna deal with thrown words at your noggin? Nah all good... I ain't here to punch ones face kid Just wanna adjust my aim, & crush they fate 'til only dust remains You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes From cats that lack talent, Dwellin' over trash they've made Nigga I live in the present, You're still stuck in '07 If there's a medal for duckin', Congrats on 13 years of bein' the recipient brethren I ain't here to kick it with kiddies, bitches or guests man & any offerin' of dick will get you instantly beheaded On site you know who I like, Who I loathe, completely like hate & with so many alias's flyin' around each/everyday, there's no point droppin' names As someone I truly despise Is prolly someone I really like anyway! All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped At the ready, on stand by Without watchin' screensavers of fish All this flippin' & floppin', switchin' & swappin' I cannot keep up with who's dick you just swallowed, Which tweet you last sent to some creep you have followed Attach leash to that collar & get dragged down the street I'll leave you gagged, bound & treated like black & brown people Beaten by a dozen black or brown police... Now tell me, how is we equal?

05-19-2020, 08:57 PM	#2
Johnny 6 feet Storyteller Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 446 Battle Record: 8-4 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5558447	Braggodocious and smooth as silk on the flow man. Your multi's were plenty but never forced. Some really cool stand out lines in this: "You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes From cats that lack talent, Dwellin' over trash they've made" Sad but true. "All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped" Hard punch. I always get an image when I read pieces like this of a dude in the gym hammering a punching bag. Gearing up for the next bout. This was good, solid sparring piece. Nice work. Thanks for the rep.