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Exis 05-17-2020 11:13 PM

Ain't Here...
 
Ayo,

Papa said: You gotta strike early & often
Mama said: Hurt 'em with knowledge
I say: If you can't read my body language,
how's you gonna deal with thrown words at your noggin?

Nah all good...

I ain't here to punch ones face kid
Just wanna adjust my aim,
& crush they fate 'til only dust remains
You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes
From cats that lack talent,
Dwellin' over trash they've made
Nigga I live in the present,
You're still stuck in '07
If there's a medal for duckin',
Congrats on 13 years of bein' the recipient brethren
I ain't here to kick it with kiddies, bitches or guests man
& any offerin' of dick will get you instantly beheaded
On site you know who I like,
Who I loathe, completely like hate
& with so many alias's flyin' around
each/everyday, there's no point droppin' names
As someone I truly despise
Is prolly someone I really like anyway!
All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped
At the ready, on stand by
Without watchin' screensavers of fish
All this flippin' & floppin', switchin' & swappin'
I cannot keep up with who's dick you just swallowed,
Which tweet you last sent to some creep you have followed
Attach leash to that collar & get dragged down the street
I'll leave you gagged, bound & treated like black & brown people
Beaten by a dozen black or brown police...

Now tell me, how is we equal?

Johnny 6 feet 05-19-2020 08:57 PM

Braggodocious and smooth as silk on the flow man. Your multi's were plenty but never forced. Some really cool stand out lines in this:

"You do know at the bottom there's nothin' but only past mistakes
From cats that lack talent,
Dwellin' over trash they've made"

Sad but true.

"All this changin' & shit, Y'all need tailors equipped"

Hard punch. I always get an image when I read pieces like this of a dude in the gym hammering a punching bag. Gearing up for the next bout. This was good, solid sparring piece. Nice work.

Thanks for the rep.


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